Essay help would be appreciated.
Any mistakes I would love to have pointed out. First is the Spanish and then the intended translation.
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En tres y medio años después de hoy aprenderé muchas para recibiré un titulo en Ciencias Políticas. Después lo, yo planearé asistir la escuela de abogado. Yo quiero trabajar para mejorar las vidas de otros personas y un governmente bien que puede crear leyes bien y una economía saludable para lo. El governmente de los Estados Unidos de América funciona basado en precedente y abogados comprenden precedente. He trabajado por el Partido Demócrata por tres años y creo que ellos es el menos de dos males. Políticos pueden ser corrupto, pero no es mi intención ser. Seré feliz con solo poder en asuntos locales porque el mundo o el país es demasiado grande para yo pudo ver mis efuerzos. Para Agosto , habré hecho todas las preparaciones para mi nuevo trabajao debajo de Dina Titus. Dina Titus pierde la elección en dos mil diez de Joe Heck, un Republicano. Ella correrá a la elección contra de Joe Heck y yo trabajaré por ella para enriquecer mi futuro y el futuro de Nevada. Conexións sera muy importante después de elección independientemente de quién ganar poque yo pudo obtener un buen futuro. Estas conexiones me ayudará con un buen futuro. El partido me ayudará pagar por la escuela de abogados porque podia trabajar para ellos. Espero que finalmente participar en politícas para ayudar el país.
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In three and a half years after today I will have learned much in order to receive a degree in political science. After that, I plan to attend law school. I want to work in order to improve the lives of other peoples and a good government can create good laws and a healthy economy for that. The government of the United States of American functions based on precedent and lawyers understand precedent. I will have worked for the Democratic Party for 3 years and I believe they are the lesser of two evils. Politicians can be corrupt, but it is not my intention to be that way. I would be happy with only power on local matters because the world or country is too big for me and I can see my efforts locally. By august I will have made preparations for my new job under Dina Titus. Dina Titus lost the election of 2010 to Joe Heck, a Republican. She will run in the election against Joe Heck and I will work for her in order to enrich my future, and the future of Nevada. Connections will be very important after the election regardless of who wins because I can obtain a good future. These connections will help me with that good future. The party will help me pay for law school because I can work for them. I hope that I can ultimately participate in politics to help the country.
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I try to do these essays from memory so sorry it is sloppy here and there. Looking back I see that I didn't have as much connection in the essay as I had wanted. Oh well. Hopefully the always wise and amazing spanish speakers of spanishdict.com can help me.
Thanks an advance!
-Wesley
1 Answer
In my opinion....
abogados que comprende el precedente
intención ser....take out the ser (it is unnecessary)
dos mil diez de Joe Hack......change to dos mil diez contra Joe Hack
sera= será
poque= porque
Hope this helps!
