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Mi inglés,es bastante malo y me gustaría saber si he traducido bien este artículo. Recibiré con alegría todas sus correcciones! 
TORMENTA BRUTAL GOLPEA BUENOS AIRES.
Fuertes vientos, granizo y fuertes lluvias afectó a la ciudad y provincia de Buenos Aires la noche del miércoles. Los residentes de la ciudad despertaron con paredes derrumbadas, coches aplastados y árboles caídos. Se reportaron 16 muertos por el temporal y gran cantidad de heridos. Además hay miles de personas que perdieron sus casas por la brutal tormenta. Los servicios de electricidad y agua potable fueron cortados en algunas partes de Buenos Aires. A causa de esto,vecinos cortaron caminos y rutas para que se restablezca el servicio de luz y agua en sus hogares. Actualmente,en varias zonas afectadas por el temporal se ha restablecido el servicio de electricidad. En cambio en otras zonas la situación sigue igual. Cabe destacar el gran trabajo realizado por defensa civil,los bomberos y gendarmería,quienes asistieron a las personas afectadas por la tormenta.
La traducción al inglés del artículo (hecha por mí)
BRUTAL STORM HITS BUENOS AIRES.
Strong winds,hail and heavy rain hit the city and province of Buenos Aires on Wednesday Night. Residents of the city awakened to crumbling walls,crushed cars and fallen trees. 16 deaths were reported from the storm and many wounded. In addition there are thousands of people who lost their homes by the brutal storm. Electricity and drinking water Were cut in parts of Buenos Aires. Because of this,neighbors cut roads and routes that are claiming to reset the service light and water in their homes. Currently, several areas affected by the storm has restored electric service. However in other areas the situation remains the same. Of note is the great work done by civil defense, fire and police station, who attended those affected by the storm.
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Strong winds,hail and heavy rain hit the city and province of Buenos Aires on Wednesday Night. Residents of the city awakened to crumbling walls,crushed cars and fallen trees. 16 deaths were reported from the storm and many injured ( decimos wounded cuando la herida es un resultado de una laceracion o disparo)** In addition there are thousands of people who lost their homes because of the the brutal storm. Electricity and drinking water were cut in parts of Buenos Aires. Because of this,neighbors cut roads and routes to reestablish eletric and water service in their homes . Currently, several areas affected by the storm have restored electric service. However in other areas the situation remains the same(bien tambien puedes is still the same, es mas cercano al original). Of note is the great work done by civil defense, fire and police station, who asisted those affected by the storm.
It looks like you've done a great job - I'm still learning too but here are a couple of suggestions
afectó a la ciudad - affected the city (instead of hit)
Wednesday night - night small 'n', a typo I'm sure
For the Spanish I would have expected 'se' despertaron.
derrumbadas - collapsed (I guess crumbling works too although for that the verb could be desmoronarse)
16 deaths were reported from the storm and many wounded - this is an unusual sentence perhaps you could say: 16 deaths from the storm (or 'due to' the storm) have been reported with many more wounded.
brutal - your translation is perfect but just to mix things up a bit if the same word appears a few times in one text you could use variations, in this case brutal could also be translated as savage or tremendous or maybe even extreme?
para que se restablezca in order to reestablish
en varias zonas afectadas por el temporal se ha restablecido el servicio de electricidad. in a number of areas affected by the storm electricity has been restored
realizado: done is good, or 'carried out'
bomberos y gendarmería firefighters and police
Strong winds,hail and heavy rain hit the city and province of Buenos Aires on Wednesday Night.
