Lyrics of a song. Is this right?

Question

The song is here on youtube http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=R19gWOTaEBA

Si tu te fueras de mi,
If you go away from me, Te juro que nunca mas volveria a ser feliz, I swear to you that I will never be happy again Me dan ganas de llorar, It makes me want to cry Solo de imaginar, estar sin ti. just to imagine to be without you

Si Tu Te Fueras De Mi If you go away from me Que Inmenso, Que Eterno How imense,how eternal Seria Mi Sufrir. I would suffer

Tu Eres Toda La Razón You are the only reason Para Que Mi Corazón Tenga Que Latir. For my heart beating

A Veces Quisiera Sometimes I want Saber Si Tu Me Amas Igual To know your love is the same De Mi Que Te Parece Mal Para Borrar Ese Error. ?

A Veces Que Lloras Sometimes you cry Quisiera Arrancar Tu Dolor I would like to extract your pain

Borrándolo Con El Amor Erase it with love Que Siento Por Ti. How I feel for you

Answer 1

I would only change 2 sentences

que eterno seria my sufrir, how eternal will my suffering be.

borrándolo con el amor que siento por ti

erasing it with the love I feel for you

other than that I think you nailed it

TY that sounds preety good ,but I don't know about the suffering part because there is no ING word. THe part with ? I did not understand well at all - Yankee111, Mar 26, 2012