correct my english

Question

Hi my name is Daniela and have 31 years old.
I live in USA, but i am from mexico. I have 2 childrens, the 2 and 6 years . I would like to learn more English

Hi, my name is Daniela. I'm 32 years old. I live in the US, but originated from Mexico. I have two children, ages two and six. I would like to learn more English. - Gregory84, Feb 19, 2012

Answer 1

Your sentence has some grametical mistakes. You can enhance it and say it in the following way. Hi, my name is Daniela, I am 31 years old. I live in U.S.A. but I am originally from Mexico. I am a mother of 2 childern, one is 2 and the other 6 years old.

Try not to reapeat the same word 2 times in a sentence to make your sentence strong. Good luck. Marlee

Hello, my name is Daniela and I'm 31 years old. I live in the United States now, but I'm orginally from Mexico. I am a Mother of two wonderful childen, one is 2 and the other is 6 years old. - MarkBaker2, Feb 19, 2012

Thanks - arajei, Feb 19, 2012

Answer 2

Hi my name is Daniela and have I am 31 years old. I live in the USA, but i I am from mexico Mexico. I have 2 childrens, the 2 and 6 two children, ages two and six. years I would like to learn more English

On the above blue menu bar at the top, click on Learn then click on Learn Spanish and scroll down to Aprender inglés 1 and watch the video tapes. - Maria-Russell, Feb 19, 2012

Arajei, under the Newest Questions heading, you can click on the 'Games' button and do 'Word of the Day." - Maria-Russell, Feb 19, 2012

thanks - arajei, Feb 19, 2012

You can learn English with your beautiful children. Especially the six year-old. Is he is school now? - Maria-Russell, Feb 19, 2012

Answer 3

Hi my name is Daniela and have 31 years old. I live in USA, but i am from mexico. I have 2 childrens, the 2 and 6 years . I would like to learn more English

Daniela,
Bienvenido al foro chica. Lo hiciste muy bien por no saber bien la idioma. Las personas, quienes publicaron correcciones que nos dio buenos consejos. Vas a aprender mucho aquí. (Estas frases me tomó 10 minutos para escribir. El año pasado estas mismas frases que me han llevado más tiempo).

gracias y espero aprender un poco mas, pero creo que es complicado - arajei, Feb 19, 2012

Answer 4

Your question had a little gramatical errors........ You should write it like this: My name is Daniela and I am 31 years old. I live in U.S.A , but i am from Mexico. I have 2 children. One is 2 years old and the other is 6.

I live in the U.S.A, but I am from...also we tend to spell single-digit numbers (two children, two years old and the other is six, but that is a small point). - webdunce, Feb 19, 2012

Also: "Your question has a few little grammatical errors..." - webdunce, Feb 19, 2012

Your answer is good, these corrections are meant to help everyong. Cheers. :) - webdunce, Feb 19, 2012

thanx!!! - yoyuts, Feb 19, 2012

thanks for you help, but I think English is complicated - arajei, Feb 19, 2012