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The Opera singer was singing so loud during the concert yesterday, that she broke a glass.
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updated Jan 23, 2012
posted by medgrey
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The opera singer was singing so loud during the concert yesterday that she broke a glass.
My changes:
The word "opera" is not capitalized in this context.
No comma after yesterday
Bien hecho
updated Jan 23, 2012
edited by SonrisaDelSol
posted by SonrisaDelSol
Right, well done, minor corrections which Sonrisa made. - Jeremias, Jan 23, 2012
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It's excellently well done. :D If I may, I will just add one other thing to Sonrisa's correction:
The opera singer was singing so loudly during the concert yesterday, that she broke a glass.
Loud is an adjective, and as you are describing the action of singing, you need to use an adverb: loudly.
Most people wouldn't notice this, but it's as well to be fussy about grammar when you're learning. 
Keep up the good work!
updated Jan 23, 2012
posted by Achsah
