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Situations/Situaciones 2.0 (12): Open House/La Casa Abierta

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Welcome to Coffeelate's and my thread! We are very happy you are taking advantage of the opportunity to practice your Spanish and/or English.

¡Bienvenido al hilo de la señorita Coffeelate y yo! Estamos muy felices que estés aprovechando la oportunidad de practicar tu español e/o inglés.

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~Corrections must be made if any of the correctors tell you./Si una correctora te dice cambiar algo, hay que hacer las correciones.

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You are a real estate agent who has been asked to hold an open house on a home that is for sale. You expect many people to visit this home, and you want to give the best presentation possible. Write the description of the home that you will give at the open house.

Eres agente inmobiliario y te han pedido hacer la casa abierta en una casa que está en venta. Esperas que muchas personas visiten esta casa, y quieres dar la mejor presentación posible. Escribe la descripción de la casa que darás en la casa abierta.

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updated Feb 4, 2012
edited by SonrisaDelSol
posted by SonrisaDelSol

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Este chalet es muy apto para los afeccíonados aficionados del esquí y de la naturaleza. Tiene su propria pista para patinar y se vende con los derechos para la pesca y la caza de foca. Solo necesita muy pocas reparacíones para ser estar listo para vivir. Tiene agua de pozo, pero no hay luz de la red. ¡Una ganga!, se vende urgentemente, a precio muy razonable.

This villa is very suitable for skiing enthusiasts and nature lovers. It has its own skating rink and the fishing and seal hunting rights are included. It needs a few minor repairs in order to be ready to live in. There is water from a well but mains electricity is not connected. A real bargain! The sale is urgent and the price very reasonable. Photobucket

updated Feb 4, 2012
edited by annierats
posted by annierats
The vendor is very axious to get a sale before spring comes. - annierats, Jan 21, 2012
In the disclaimer, did you list whether or not the roof leaks? - Ranman, Jan 21, 2012
Excelent Annierats! Just few corrections! - 00a4c226, Jan 21, 2012
Ranman, the roof neds minor repairs, that's all. You know us estate agents, we look on the positive side. - annierats, Jan 22, 2012
Thank you coffee, my secret hobby is looking at houses...That way I get to speak Spanish too, I'm very crafty. - annierats, Jan 22, 2012
Good luck with your sale ;) - 00a4c226, Jan 22, 2012
Thank you coffe, we have 3 months yet, to get a contract signed.. - annierats, Jan 23, 2012
Coffee, in the small ads in Spain, they do say : Lista para vivir..But I think they text half the ads in, some are very odd inded. - annierats, Jan 23, 2012
Very good Annie :) entonces "el chalet esta listo para vivir (o para mudarse)". It's a regional use, and doesn't sound sooo! bad +_* - 00a4c226, Jan 24, 2012
Correction for English: "it has its own..." (no apostrophe on "its" for possessive) - pesta, Feb 3, 2012
Thank you both, I shall endeavour to edit. - annierats, Feb 4, 2012
And coffee, I now realize I was thinking ' la casa' but writing ' el chalet' , no wonder it went wrong! Thanks! - annierats, Feb 4, 2012
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Hello my dear friends!

I am very happy to be your

moderator for this thread

Every single post is important.

Thank you for participating

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updated Jan 25, 2012
posted by 00a4c226
Thanks to you for all you do - Ranman, Jan 22, 2012
You're welcome ^_^ - 00a4c226, Jan 22, 2012
Many thanks coffee, how much do we pay for these ads on your agency site? - annierats, Jan 24, 2012
I am just starting my business, so, all ads are free for the first month. And you don't need to pay membership +_^ - 00a4c226, Jan 24, 2012
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I am offering this large home, shoe size 1000. It comes complete with an old lady and alot of children.

Estoy ofreciendo esta casa grande, zapato numero un talla mil. Viene completa con un vieja señora y muchos niños.

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updated Jan 24, 2012
edited by 00a4c226
posted by Ranman
lol.. - annierats, Jan 21, 2012
Can you please specify the income from the sitting tenants? It is very important to me, as a businesswoman. - annierats, Jan 21, 2012
Well, they don't actually pay rent.:p - Ranman, Jan 21, 2012
Good job Ranman! - 00a4c226, Jan 21, 2012
Thank you so much coffeelate, you are awesome:) - Ranman, Jan 22, 2012
What is the price, Ranman, it does seem to have mains electrics.. Do you know how long the tenants have been there? - annierats, Jan 23, 2012
No annie, I don't know how long they have lived there but I do know the house has been "resoled" - Ranman, Jan 23, 2012
Good, no damp then. I'm worried the tenants may have squatter's rights, it could prove difficult to get them out. - annierats, Jan 24, 2012
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Amarás eso esta casa! Hay muchas ventanas y puertas de escape. También, hay los muebles pequeños.Está bien oler el queso cada manaña! La casa del ratón!

You will love this house! There are many windows and doors for escape. Also, there is small furniture. It is good to smell cheese every morning! The mouse house!

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updated Jan 24, 2012
edited by 00a4c226
posted by Courtenaymomma
Jaja!! - SonrisaDelSol, Jan 21, 2012
+_+ Nice job Courtenaymom! - 00a4c226, Jan 21, 2012
El gato quiere hacer una oferta buena.. - annierats, Jan 23, 2012
jeje! - Courtenaymomma, Jan 23, 2012
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This house has much a lot of character, and has a big sunny yard that is perfect for a garden. The price is low, because the house needs a few repairs. It has no gas leaks and the basement is dry. It can be your dream home today!

Esta casa tiene mucho carácter, y tiene un gran patio soleado que es perfecto para un jardín. El precio es bajo, debido a que la casa necesita varias reparaciones. No tiene fugas de gas y el sótano está seco. ¡Puede ser el hogar de sus sueños hoy!

Okay, I succumbed to all the suggestions to avoid "much" here. I still prefer "much" but I recognize that "a lot of" is probably preferred by most speakers.

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updated Jan 23, 2012
edited by pesta
posted by pesta
Pesta! Would you really say "much" there in English? Just curious. - rabbitwho, Jan 21, 2012
I see what you are saying with the much usage :) - SonrisaDelSol, Jan 21, 2012
Wow Pesta! Excelent ^_^ - 00a4c226, Jan 21, 2012
Nagy ötlet - porcupine7, Jan 22, 2012
@Rabbit - Yes, I believe "much" is used correctly here. - pesta, Jan 22, 2012
¡Muchas gracias, Coffee! - pesta, Jan 22, 2012
You can say much, or ' a lot of'.. great offer Pesta! Tiene chimenea o no? - annierats, Jan 23, 2012
I agree with Annie. It all has to do with preference (and I guess, region). - Goldie_Miel, Jan 23, 2012
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Esta casa es muy grande y es maravillosa para una familia grande. Tiene cuatro dormitorios, dos baños, una sala, una cocina, un comedor, y un garaje. Hay un sótano que puede ser usado para almacenamiento también. El patio es muy grande, también, y tiene espacio mucho para niños jugar mucho espacio para que los niños jueguen.

This house is very large and is wonderful for a large family. It has four bedrooms, two bathrooms, a living room, a kitchen, a dining room, and a garage. There is a basement that can be used as storage too. The yard is very large, also, and has a lot of space for children to play.


I couldn't find a word for yard and the dictionary said that "el jardín" could be translated as "garden" or as "yard." Is that correct or is there a better word?

Muchas gracias a Coffeelate por sus correciones.


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updated Feb 3, 2012
edited by 00a4c226
posted by Jadey7
Hi Jadey! ¨jardín¨:¨garden¨ and ¨patio¨: ¨yard¨. Very nice! - 00a4c226, Jan 21, 2012
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Como agente inmobiliario exitoso ofrezco esta casa modesta pero bonita. La más grande virtud de esta casa es la vista extraordinaria en las montañas de Baviera. La casa tiene salas pintadas y representativas. La calefacción central es muy moderna. Creo que cualquier cliente podría estar satisfecho con esta casa.

As a successful real estate agent I am offering this modest , but beautiful house. The best virtue of this house the extraordinary view of the bavarian mountains. The house has painted and representative saloons . The central heating is very modern. I think any client can be satisfied with this house.

updated Jan 23, 2012
edited by porcupine7
posted by porcupine7
I'm not the official corrector but it seems to me that "The biggest virtue" would sound better as "The best virtue." You also need an "e" on the word "the." - Jadey7, Jan 21, 2012
Es una ganga! Que casita tan bonita. - annierats, Jan 21, 2012
Thank you Jadey! Hola Porcupine! Great Spanish grammar! ...You mean ¨podría estar satisfecho¨. - 00a4c226, Jan 21, 2012
Gracias Coffelate - porcupine7, Jan 22, 2012
Thanks Jadey - porcupine7, Jan 22, 2012
Gracias annie por la palabra nueva " ganga" - porcupine7, Jan 22, 2012
"is the extraordinary view"......."has painted rooms"... ¨will be¨ - bandit51jd, Jan 23, 2012
Your writing encourages me! We just need to remember corresponding verbs and adjectives. Example, podría corresponds with ¨will be¨. - bandit51jd, Jan 23, 2012
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In this difficult economy, we all have to make sacrifices, but not so in this case. You can still have your very own van, down by the river. This lovely home doubles as your transportation, so if you want a change in location, or dread a morning commute, simply park somewhere else! This offer is economical, fun, and keeps you closer to the outdoors.

En esta economía dificíl, tenemos que hacer sacrificios, pero no es asi en este caso. Puede todavía tiene tener su propia camioneta, abajo por el río. Esta casa linda hace también de su transportación, asi que viajar diariamente al lugar de trabajo lo da pavor, o quiera un cambio de locación, ¡simplemente estaciona en otro sitio! Esta oferta es económica, divertida, y lo mantiene cerca del campo.

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updated Jan 25, 2012
edited by 00a4c226
posted by mandamagoo
Good thinking! - annierats, Jan 23, 2012
Great job Manda..."living in a van is not so bad" +_* - 00a4c226, Jan 24, 2012
Thanks for the corrections coffelate. - mandamagoo, Jan 25, 2012
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For sale..An architect designed home in the countryside.This magnificen log cabin has four spacious bedrooms ,two with ensuites,a modern kitchen ,lounge with open fireplace ,office,and many other luxury appointments .This home is suited to the family who are able enjoy the many pleasurable persuits the countryside has to offer. Para En venta.Un architecto diseñado diseñó casa en un campo.Esta magnífica cabaña de troncos ha tiene cuatro dormitorios,dos con cuartos de baños propios,una cocina moderna.un salón con abrir chimenea ,una oficina ,y muchos otros de lujo accesorios accesorios de lujo.Esta casa está adecuada para la familia que son capaces a disfrutar el muchos actividads en oferta. es capaz de disfrutar las placenteras actividades que el campo tiene para ofrecer.

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updated Jan 23, 2012
edited by 00a4c226
posted by jennyo45
Hey Jennyo! For sale (en venta, a la venta or se vende) muy bien! - 00a4c226, Jan 21, 2012
I know! the last sentence was not easy ;) But you tried! - 00a4c226, Jan 21, 2012
Thanks coffee ,oh dear,I seem to be a long way off yet..next one I will try to make it easier . - jennyo45, Jan 22, 2012
Is that a covered sauna over to the left! Sigh... what a peaceful cabin! - bandit51jd, Jan 23, 2012
I agree with you bandit. - jennyo45, Jan 23, 2012
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Hoy les doy los detalles de esta residencia tan bonita. ¡He aquí un magnificente magnífico castillo de arena! El castillo se ubica en una de las playas de la Península Coronado y se queda bien cerca al Hotel del Coronado, uno de los lugares más buscados en California. Una ventaja de vivir en un castillo tan grande es tener suficiente espacio para recibir huéspedes y amigos (y varios vagabundos de la playa) No se preocupen si se caen las murallas y las torres, lo que comprarán ustedes es el título de propiedad, no el edificio. Cuando caiga su castillo, algún artista vendrá a hacer uno nuevo y, en muchas ocasiones, aún más bonito que antes.

Today I will tell you about this beautiful residence. It is a sand castle! The castle is located on one of the beaches of the Península Coronado and is very close to the Hotel del Coronado, one of the most sought after places in California. An advantage of living in such a large castle is having enough room to have guests and friends over (and even some beach bums). Don't worry if your walls and towers fall down, what you are buying is the deed to the land, not the building. When your castle falls down and artist will come to make a new one that is often even better than before.

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updated Jan 23, 2012
edited by 00a4c226
posted by unMica
this is 30 minutes from my house : D - unMica, Jan 21, 2012
Mica, I prefer this to the ice one, how much are you asking? If I get a good offer for mine, I'll try to get a mortgage. - annierats, Jan 21, 2012
tell you what, be my friend miss annie and you can have it! - unMica, Jan 21, 2012
Almost perfect Unmica! casi-casi ;) - 00a4c226, Jan 21, 2012
wuyyyyy casi casi. aunque sea más correcto decir "vagabundo" me gusta más beach bum : P - unMica, Jan 22, 2012
This is the one for me! - Ranman, Jan 22, 2012
Mica, you have ahot property here, my clients are very interested too, if we can just get rid of the ice house before it melts. - annierats, Jan 23, 2012
haha - unMica, Jan 23, 2012
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Gracias, las mujeres y los caballeros para viniendo a nuestra abierta casa damas y caballeros por venir a nuestra casa abierta. Aprecio esta participación maravillosa tantos muchas de tener que usar ustedes como muchos de ustedes tuvieron que usar los sistemas de posicionamiento global para llegar a esta alejada, terrenos propiedad frente al mar. El muelle cubierto es muy elegante y acomodará su lancha de carreras. El interior de la casa se ha pintado recién (or está recién pintado) y nueva alfombra se ha instalado. La suite matrimonial incluye un cuarto de baño lleno completo con un gran paseo cuarto de ducha. Y ahora, vamos a empezar nuestra gira física…..

Thank you, ladies and gentlemen for coming to our open house. I appreciate this wonderful turnout as many of you had to use your GPS’s to arrive to this secluded, beachfront property. The covered dock is very stylish and will accommodate your speed boat. The home’s interior has been freshly painted and new carpeting has been installed. The master bedroom suite includes a full bathroom with a large walk-in shower. And now, let’s go begin our physical tour……

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updated Jan 25, 2012
edited by 00a4c226
posted by bandit51jd
I could go for that! - mandamagoo, Jan 24, 2012
Hi Bandit! I made some suggestions for you +_+ Now, you'll get a great offer :o - 00a4c226, Jan 24, 2012
Wow, I learned a lot on this one, muchas gracias, coffeelate! - bandit51jd, Jan 25, 2012
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A life's dream to live in an architectural masterpiece is closer than ever! In whichever place of the world you live, this is the house for you. A prefab and sustainable house with zero carbon footprint is delivered at your doorstep. Comprised of two floors and a basement, a living room, four bedrooms, bathrooms with mirror TVs, aluminum-framed balcony and lots more to discover. Not to mention that the whole package comes in an attractive price!

¡El sueño de su vida de vivir en una obra maestra de arquitectura está más cerca que nunca! En cualquier lugar del mundo donde viva, esta es la casa para usted. Una casa prefabricada y sostenible con cero huella de carbono, es entregada en su umbral. Constado de dos suelos, cuatro habitaciones, baños con espejos-televisores, balcones con marco de aluminio y mucho más para descubrir. ¡Ni hablar de que todo el paquete viene en un precio atractivo!

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updated Jan 23, 2012
edited by ianta
posted by ianta
I'm sure I have many mistakes, that was an advanced Spanish text for me. Thanks in advance Sonrisa and Coffeelate for the corrections. - ianta, Jan 22, 2012
Your idea is wonderful Ianta! But let me suggest you another way to flow more natural in Spanish: ¨el sueño de su vida de vivir... - 00a4c226, Jan 22, 2012
¨en cualquier lugar del mundo donde viva, esta es la casa para usted¨...I love your last sentence. Ni hablar! - 00a4c226, Jan 22, 2012
Thank you very much for the corrections Coffeelate! - ianta, Jan 22, 2012
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Se vende esta amplia casa de 3 pisos ubicada en la colonia privada de Las Palmas. Tiene 5 recámaras y 4 baños completos (el de la recámara principal viene con jacuzzi.)

Hay una cocina nueva, y todos los electrodomésticos de acero inoxidable están incluidos. También hay una cochera doble que está conectada a la casa.

Detrás de esta hermosa casa verán un patio grande con un bonito jardín y una piscina que toda la familia podrá disfrutar... y la mejor parte es que al comprar esta casa, recibirás un año de servicio de housekeeping mantenimiento completamente gratis.


(Some parts are loosely translated. -- I am horrible with Spanish to English)

Here we have this spacious house with 3 floors for sale. It is located in the colony / neighborhood "Las Palmas". It has 5 bedrooms and 4 full bathrooms (the one in the master bedroom comes with a Jacuzzi.)

There is a new kitchen, and all of the stainless steel appliances are included. There is also a double garage connected to the house.

Behind this beautiful house you (all) will see a large yard with a lovely gardin and a pool that the whole family will be able to enjoy... and the best part is upon buying this house, you will receive one year of housekeeping completely free.

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updated Jan 25, 2012
edited by 00a4c226
posted by NikkiLR
Excelent Nikkipedia :O And one year of housekeeping free! Wow! Great idea +_+ - 00a4c226, Jan 24, 2012
Thank you very much!!!! :D - NikkiLR, Jan 24, 2012