wat is theme

Question

disconnect from everything

Answer 1

My changes and suggestions (are in CAPITAL LETTERS)

I THINK YOU DID VERY WELL. Bien hecho.

If I were a butterfly… I would have two big wings decorated with bright colours like yellow, blue, green and red. Furthermore my wings would be soft and resistant. ON the other hand, my body would be slender, like my antennae. If I were a butterfly I WOULD travel around the World, I WOULD fly above / OVER the seas and mountains and I WOULD stop at small villages and big cities to look at (the) people who live there. I would like to see how people dress, which / what things they eat, WHAT THE RELATIOMNSHIP IS BETWEEN MEN AND WOMEN.After a long travel I would come back at home and I wopuld explain all my adventures to my relatives and friends.

But I am not sure if I would prefer to be a dolphin… If I were a dolphin I could / would swim IN / across all the seas and Oceans and (I) could see the SEABED that is full of different fishes and plants. I love to practise snorkelling and look at small fishes with different shapes and colours that look like stones, plants and other big fishes / FISH and sometimes it is difficult to differentiate them from the environment. When I am under the water I disconnect from everything, I forget who I am, I do not listen TO anything, I only swim and look at the rocks ON the bed of sea… If I were a dolphin, I do not need to breath WHEN NOT UNDER the water and I could swim fast.

I hope this helps.

Ian