Translation correction

Question

Hi all,

Could anybody check my translation? I would be really appreciated if anyone can help me on this issue. Many thanks!

…cuando en Paris me pidieron que convirtiera la coleccion de Escenas Goyescas en opera, me dirigi al senor Periquet y le pedi que hicera un libro en que estuvieran comprendidas todas aquellas, dejando a su criterio la formacion del drama que el creyese y tejer la accion con el material que yo le entregaba.

…when in Paris I was asked to convert the collection of scene into the opera Goyescas; I turned to Sr. Periquet and asked him to make a libretto in which were include all those pieces, leaving to him the criterion on the formation of the drama that he believe and crave out the action with the material that I presented to him.

Answer 1

accents are missing, other than that I don't see any errors.

oops

hiciera

Thank you so much chileno! Yes I have typo. Thanks for pointing this out! - dumplings8, Jan 16, 2012