una mirada enloquecide

Question

What is the best translation for " mirada enloquecida de sobreviente" ?

Me he perdido en tus cabellos de liana, en tu mirada enloquecida de sobreviviente de naufragio, en tus gestos repentinos de locura enclaustrada; déjame ser la llave que me permita entrar y echar el cerrojo para estar solos por siempre jamás.

Please remember to use proper capitalization on all of your posts. - Yeser007, Jan 5, 2012

Answer 1

en tu mirada enloquecida de sobreviviente de naufragio

"...in your crazed gaze of a shipwreck survivor.." I suspect he had read the "Ancient Mariner" ... grey beard loon

I', m impressed,birdland. Not an everyday way of putting it. - annierats, Jan 5, 2012

Answer 2

Me he perdido en tus cabellos de liana, en tu mirada enloquecida de sobreviviente de naufragio, en tus gestos repentinos de locura enclaustrada; déjame ser la llave que me permita entrar y echar el cerrojo para estar solos por siempre jamás.

A clumsly but literal translation follows. It's very poetic and hence doesn't translate literally very well at all.

I have lost myself in your hair of lianas, in your face full of life for (being) the survivor of a shipwreck, your sudden gestures of cloistered insanity; let me be the key that permits me to enter and open the lock to never be alone again forever.

Wow!! Good job Jeremias! - territurtle, Jan 6, 2012

Answer 3

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