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May someone proofread this, to see if correct in context?

May someone proofread this, to see if correct in context?

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The following may need to be more comprehensible, or not, but please make it more coherent, thanks! grin

1.) Ella se dedica a molesta a los seres humanos, mientras banquetear con nuestro mil dolar comida, y tambien para dar me empressa.

2.) A ella le gusta duerme, come, o juega con su amigo/ enemigo, Diego, al igual que lo hace cualquier otro gato, en su tiempo libre.

3.) Me opina de ella que aunque ella es una molestia, ella es muy reconfortante.

4.) Ella es pequena, fuerte en el oido y vista, y bien cuidado.

Possible Answers in English

1.) She is dedicated to annoy humans, while eating with our one thousand dollar food, and also to give me comfort.

2.) She likes to sleep, eat, or play with her friend/enemy, Diego, as does any other cat in it's spare time.

3.) My opinion of her is that although she is an annoyance, she is very comforting.

4.) She is small, strong in the ears and eyes, and well groomed.

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updated Dec 23, 2011
posted by Navegando
Welcome to the forum :) Please accept your first vote! - Kiwi-Girl, Dec 23, 2011

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A note for the second one: smile

A ella le gusta dormir, comer o jugar - follow gustar (conjugated) with a verb (or verbs) in the infinitive form

updated Dec 23, 2011
posted by Kiwi-Girl
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I'm not a native speaker but I'll start you off with a few suggestions, feel free to wait for a native speaker's thoughts though:

For the first one smile

a molestaR (she is dedicated to annoyING - or I'd actually say bothering)

comiéndose instead of banquetear

hmmm perhaps - comida que vale mil dólares?

para darme 'consuelo'

updated Dec 23, 2011
posted by Kiwi-Girl