Add a little to my skit?
Hi, I have to perform a skit in the front of the class with my partner Nick and it is supposed to be about 5 minutes long. I wrote about 3 minutes so far and I was wondering if anyone could tell me if it sounds okay and if you could squeeze a few more lines in there that would be cool too lol. Thanks in advance! (The conversation is on etiquette on the internet, we are talking about the rules)
Pg. 421 La Netiquette (Etiquette) 1.Keep in mind that other side of your screen is a real human being with its own ideas and feelings. Never write anything that I would not say face to face with another person. 2. Keep your statements brief and to the point. 3. Do not send a long distribution list attached as graphics files. The correct procedure is to put them somewhere in the network and send the URL to the list so that interested parties can access them. 4. When answering a message, leave an appointment so that you know what you are referring to you, but please, cut out everything else. 5. Never answer an e-mail when angry or upset. 6. Be careful with personal information or private. Do not send a distribution list data from other people, such as address or telephone number. 7. Make sure you are sending your email to the correct recipient before pressing the button "Send". 8. Capital letters can be used to replace or to emphasize accents, but do not write in all caps, as this network is interpreted as that! YOU ARE SHOUTING! 9. Do not use a distribution list to promote or advance religious causes, philosophical, political, commercial or promote your own site. 10. If you receive a warning about a virus that spreads by email or something similar, do not write to its distribution list to alert all members. Most likely is that this is one of many hoaxes that abound on the net. Notify administrators only to the list and they investigate.
Conversation:
Hi Professor Nicolas, how are you today? Hola Profesor Nicolas, ¿cómo está hoy?
Hey Professor Ryan, I am fine thanks. Hola Profesor Ryan, estoy bien gracias.
Can you do me a favor? Could you help me prepare a list on Etiquette for the students in my social media course? Puedo pedirle un favor?¿Podría ayudarme a preparar una lista en la etiqueta para los estudiantes de mi curso de medios sociales?
seems like a good idea to me Me parece una idea buena Great! Thank you very much, I greatly appreciate it! Muchas gracias. Lo aprecio de veras. Lo agradecería mucho. Seems like a good idea to me
Si, Me parece una idea buena
I agree with rule number one, users should be very respectful to the other humans on the web. Estoy de acuerdo con la primera regla, los usuarios deben ser muy respetuosos con los demás seres humanos en la web.
I could not agree more Professor, that rule is a keeper! No podria estar más de acuerdo, esa regla is Buena! I like rule number five, I think that’s a very important rule. You definitely DO NOT want them to send any personal or private information such as their address over the internet! Me gusta regla número cinco, creo que esa es una regla muy importante. Usted definitivamente no quiere que se puede enviar cualquier información personal o privada como su dirección en internet! That shouldn’t be done. Do not enter any private information such as credit cards or your social security number over the web unless the website is secure. No se debe hacer eso. No se debe introducir información confidencial, como tarjetas de crédito o su número de seguro social a través de Internet a menos que el sitio es seguro. Number ten on the list I would like to add to. If they receive a warning about a virus they should contact a Professor right away! "Me gustaria agregar al numero diez en la lista. Si se recibe una advertencia acerca de un virus se debe comunicarse con un profesor enseguida!
Yes! Yes! That is very important! Viruses can cause chaos! They can cause you to lose all of your data! Sí! Sí! Eso es muy importante! Los viruses pueden causar caos! Ellos pueden hacer que usted pierda todos sus datos! Is there anything else that you would like to add or changed in the list?
¿Hay algo más que quisiera agregar o cambiar en la lista? I think that we got everything, thank you very much for your help Professor! Creo que tenemos todo, muchas gracias por su ayuda, profesor! Your welcome! Have a good day Nicholas! De nada! Que tenga un buen dia, Nicholas! Good day Ryan! Buenos días Ryan!
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As you have no answers I'll only say that I have no idea what 'skit' means in English.
You're asking us to do an awful lot of reading without telling us what it is all in aid of.
My only suggestion is that Buenos Días is not a farewell phrase, Hasta lluego might be better, at the end, or posiblemente Adios. Maybe other people will come to your aid. I certainly don't think you should add any more!
The obvious choice is that since you only refer to some of the Netiquette Rules add comments about the others.
Skit just means to perform a short movie or play. I am trying to write a short easy play to perform in front of the class and this is what I got so far, I just need a little more.
