Can someone please proofread my sentences?
The English is right below the Spanish for each. Thank you!
La olla era un símbolo de la cocina de la mamá. La mamá tenia buenos recuerdos de la olla. Era una cosa especial para la mamá.
The pot was a symbol of the kitchen of the mom. The mom had good memories of the pot. It was a special thing to the mother.
A no mi me gusta la vida de esta familia. Pienso que los niños no tenían amigos porque su familia siempre mudarse. Una solución para esta problema es que los padres deben encontrar un trabajo en Fresno.
I do not like the life of this family. I think that the children do not have friends because their family always moves. A solution to this problem is that the parents should find a new job in Fresno.
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La olla era un símbolo de la cocina de la mamá. La mamá tenia buenos recuerdos de la olla. Era una cosa especial para la mamá.
If you are talking about your mother, the "la" before "mamá" is not needed. I'll leave it there if you are talking about somebody else's mother. In this second case, I would use "madre". It sounds better. I would also avoid repeating "madre".
La olla era un símbolo de la cocina de la madre. Ella tenía buenos recuerdos de la olla. Era una cosa especial para ella.
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You are not consistent with the tenses on the second one. Either use the present or the past. Not both.
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A no mi me gusta la vida de esta familia. Pienso que los niños no tienen amigos porque su familia siempre se muda. Una solución para este problema es que los padres encuentren un trabajo en Fresno.
I'm watching this one. I don't know enough to give corrections but I would likely say "A mi no me gusta" there and "Creo" instead of "Penso" but then I often confuse those two.
