Proof Reading (native american pageant) Part 2

Question

Do you see any grammar or syntax errors?

Por ejemplo, hubo un competidor un desfile de moda Americana Nativa que hablaba en el lenguaje española, el lenguaje del amerindo y el lenguaje inglés durante su introducción. Lo pude comprender dos de los lenguajes que habla durante su introducción . Me gusta este competidor para su diversidad. Hay otras influencias de la cultura durante el desfile de moda Americana Nativa.

For example there was one contestant at the pageant that spoke in Spanish, native language, Native American during her introduction. I could understand two of the languages she spoke during her introduction.I like this contestant for her diversity. There other influences of culture during the pageant.

Answer 1

For example there was one contestant at the pageant that spoke in Spanish, native language, Native American during her introduction. I could understand two of the languages she spoke during her introduction.I like this contestant for her diversity. There other influences of culture during the pageant.

Por ejemplo, hubo una competidora en el desfile que hablaba Castellano, idioma nativo, indio americano durante su presentación. Pude entender dos de los idiomas que habló durante su presentación. Me gusta esta concursante por su diversidad. Hay otras influencias culturales en el concurso.

The english version is not that well written to begin with, so...

Tal vez quiso decir: that spoke in Spanish and in her native language, a Native American one, during her introduction. - nelson_rafael, Nov 23, 2011