could you help me proofread my English mistakes ? similarities and differences
Could you help me please? I know that it is wrong, but I don't know how to improve it.
The culture, weather and architecture are integral parts of a society whether that society is located a remote department of Cuzco at the South of Perú. The culture, weather, so on, of Lima is part of a metropolitan city and Capital of Perú, it seems so different. Everything characterizes in their difference between Cuzco and Lima in their people, in their language, in their architecture, in their weather, in their geography. However they have similarities: the great count of different people from off all over the world, the behavior in the night life in both cities. On the surface at least, Cuzco and Lima are societies that seem to have many similarities and differences.
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Culture, weather and architecture are integral parts of a society even if that society is located in a remote area like Cuzco in the South of Peru. The culture, weather, and so on, of Lima is that of a metropolitan city and capital of Peru, it seems so different. the differences between Cuzco and Lima are characterized by their people, their language, in their architecture, in their weather, in their geography. However they have similarities: the great number of different people from all over the world and the night life in both cities. On the surface at least, Cuzco and Lima are societies that seem to have many similarities and differences.
Some suggestions for you. Well done overall it was very good.
