Hi I need another translation

Question

Can you please translate this for me i want to write it on a poster board You are my strength, my ray of hope, you carry my burden on your shoulders. You are my guardian angel, and i have a never ending debt to you. I will never forget how you gave me the faith to move forward and pursue a life of happiness.

Answer 1

Here's my translation.

Tú eres mi fuerza, mi rayo de esperanza, que llevar mi carga sobre sus hombros. Tú eres mi ángel de la guarda, y tengo una deuda que nunca termina para usted. Nunca olvidaré cómo me dio la fe para seguir adelante y llevar una vida de felicidad.

Hope I helped!

-Cindy.

Answer 2

Eres mi fuerza y mi esperanza, y me quitas el peso que me carga. Eres mi ángel guardián y siempre te lo agradeceré. Jamás me olvidaré de que me has dado la fe que me faltaba para seguir en busca de una vida llena de felicidad.

That's just a shot at it, I know it's not perfect but it definitely has some good ideas in there. Maybe someone can just take what I did and make it better : )

Answer 3

You may want to use more general words. Many words in English can't be translated to Spanish directly, and vice versa. Some of those words have no equivalent in Spanish, so reconsider this and use easier, more general words that are in every language. Also, many of these things like "guardian angel" would sound silly if they were translated directly to Spanish. Spanish-speaking people would laugh at that and wonder at who it was who thought of such a ridiculous thing! So use general words that are in every language like "you protect me, you helped me, i owe you lots, etc" I know what you wrote sounds meaningful and emotional, but in Spanish, it may just sound ridiculous.

well the key to translating is using equivalent words, as opposed to literal exact ones, so it can be done - unMica, Nov 21, 2011

also ángel guardián is not uncommon or silly sounding at all! - unMica, Nov 21, 2011