Please someone help me :) Is the grammar correct? Please check it. Thanks a lot!
One night when some children were playing on the field they were approached by a woman who asked for a white dog, they told him they had seen nothing. A few moments later the woman disappeared into the forest.
The next day the children returned to the same place and saw a white dog, they thought it was the dog that she wanted. They tried to catch the dog but now a light white dog appeared and became the woman who had seen the night before. Immediately the children tried to run away, but something prevented them. To his surprise the woman told them she needed help to return to the river where she died 59 years ago. After while he children tried to help her return to the river.
Finally when she entered, into a dog again and I let the kids a crystal goblet, and said he will never thirst and disappeared.
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One night when some children were playing in a field they were approached by a woman who asked for a white dog. They told her they had seen nothing. A few moments later the woman disappeared into the forest.
The next day the children returned to the same place and saw a white dog, they thought it was the dog that she wanted. They tried to catch the dog but now a light white dog appeared and became the woman who they had seen the night before. Immediately the children tried to run away, but something prevented them. To their surprise the woman told them she needed help to return to the river where she had died years ago. After a while the children tried to help her return to the river.
{Finally when she entered, into a dog again and I let the kids a crystal goblet, and said he will never thirst and disappeared.} I'm not sure what this last part means.
