Please, can you check my concludind paragraph

Question

To sum up, the achievement of reduce the number of people suffer from stress is to know about the causes and effects. You just need to take in account these important points when you stay at work, Icpna or apartment. The key is that you have all the information how to life with stress, talk about specific topic in front of many people and prepare many term papers for your institute. You should remember that all those information, which were mentioned, are essential and important to counteract stress.

Please can you check my concluding paragraph - teasip, Nov 18, 2011

Answer 1

To sum up, the achievement of reducing the number of people suffering from stress is to know about its causes and effects. You just need to take in to account these important points whether you stay at work, I.C.P.N.A or apartment. The key is to have all the information abouthow to live with stress, talk about specific topics in front of many people and prepare many term papers for your institute. You should remember that all of this information, which were mentioned, is essential and important to counteract stress.

Well doen Teasip, Ihave to say, you must be an angel. - annierats, Nov 18, 2011

Thank you for your corrections teasip - mari-t1982, Nov 18, 2011

Answer 2

To sum up, the achievement of reducing the number of people suffering from stress is due to knowing about cause and effect. You just need to take in account these important points when you stay at work, ICPNA, or an apartment. The key is that you have all the information on how to live with stress, know how to talk about specific topics in front of many people, and have prepared many term papers for your institute. You should remember that all of the information that has been mentioned is essential and important to counteract stress.

Thank you for your help lorenzo9 - mari-t1982, Nov 18, 2011