Correct my sentence please?
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"They can say the new rules silently if they are in a zone that allows this."
"Ellos puede decir las reglas nuevas en silencio si ellos estan en una zona eso permite esto."
Thanks to who ever helps, you're awesome. 
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updated Nov 21, 2011
edited by kiersten11
posted by kiersten11
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You wrote: "They can say the new rules silently if they are in a zone that allows this."
Ellos pueden decir las reglas nuevas en silencio cuando están en un lugar que lo permite.
Sounds funny. Are they using sign language?
updated Nov 21, 2011
posted by Carhl
It's from Calvinball XD - kiersten11, Nov 21, 2011
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This seems to be a rule, which also seems a bit strange, but in any case a more formal sentence structure would be appropriate, ie: "Pueden decir las nuevas reglas en silencio siempre y cuando se encuentren en una zona en donde se permite."
updated Nov 21, 2011
posted by 005faa61
Yeah, it's a weird rule, it's a weird game! Thanks :) - kiersten11, Nov 21, 2011
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"Sentence"
updated Nov 18, 2011
posted by kmaakheru
yes thank you. I meant the spanish XD - kiersten11, Nov 18, 2011
