Does my paragraph make sense?

Question

ella se llamaba selena. ella hacia 23 anos. ella nacia en lake jackson texas. selena cantaban desde ella era 3 anos. cuando selena era 9 ella cantaban en un grupo llamaban selena y los dinos. luego ellos realizaban en bodas, quinceaneras, y ferias. en 1985 selena grababa ella primera album. mis primeras grabaciones, en 14 anos. ella es muy importante por que ella era llamaba la reina de tejano musica

Welcome to the forum. Please use proper capitalization, punctuation, and spelling, as there are English learners here as well. - Jeremias, Nov 15, 2011

Why don't you correct your post using the edit command and then wait for some responses? - Jeremias, Nov 15, 2011

Answer 1

Welcome to the forum Myob - there seem to be a lot of errors in your paragraph and as Jeremias pointed out proper use of capitals etc is compulsory here so you might like to go back and edit your post.

As you edit I would suggest checking your answers keeping in mind that in Spanish

you 'have' so many years of age (tener) - not haber or ser

and when you are born it is usually stated in the preterite tense instead of the imperfect - as it's a one-off completed action in the past.

Were you going to have a try to fix your paragraph? If you do, please come back and post and we can help with any necessary corrections. - Kiwi-Girl, Nov 15, 2011