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Me gustan los restaurantes Jason's Deli y Five GuysMe gustan los restaurantes Jason's Deli y Five Guys. Jason's Deli es tan sabroso como Five Guys. Jason's Deli prepara mas platos que Five Guys. Jason's Deli es mas caro que Five Guys. A mi hermano le gusta Five Guys mas que yo. Jason's Deli tiene la ensalada, pero Five Guys no. Las papas fritas de Five Guys de Five Guys son tan ricos como Jason's Deli. Las fruitas tienen menos calorias que las papas fritas. Jason's Deli es mas saludable que Five Guys. Los camareros de Jason's Deli son tan interesantes comos los cameros de Five Guys. El sandwich de Jason's Deli es menos sabroso que la hamguerger de Five Guys. Jason's Deli cueta mas dinero que Five Guys. La sopa de Jason's Deli es mas grande que la sopa Five guys. Jason's Deli esta mas cerca de mi casa que Five Guys.

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updated Nov 13, 2011
posted by meeshellexx

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I believe that más (more) still requires its accent mark to distinguish it from mas (but).

frutas is misspelled.

tan interesante como (not comos)

Las papas fritas de Five Guys de Five Guys son tan ricas

hamburguesa is misspelled

calorías is misspelled

cuesta is misspelled

la sopa de Five Guys.

está is misspelled

Me gustan los restaurantes Jason's Deli y Five GuysMe gustan los restaurantes Jason's Deli y Five Guys.

This may not be technically incorrect, but just to mention it: Spanish does not use copulatively conjuncted words or phrases as English does. Spanish typically repeats definite articles and adjectives on each side of the conjunction.

Me gustan el restaurante Jason's Deli y el restaurante Five Guys.

I have read an explanation of why that is, but have no idea in which article I read it. Just to wing an explanation:

este perro y este gato=this dog and this cat

este pero y gato=this cat/dog hybrid

Silly illustration, but perhaps you get the point.

updated Nov 14, 2011
edited by 0074b507
posted by 0074b507
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A mi hermano le gusta Five Guys mas que a mí.

Las papas fritas de Five Guys de Five Guys son tan ricas como las de Jason's Deli.

Las frutas tienen menos calorias que las papas fritas.

El sandwich de Jason's Deli no es tan sabroso como la hamburguesa de Five Guys.

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Check your spelling. There are a couple of extra mistakes and some tildes missing.

updated Nov 14, 2011
posted by 00e657d4