Please, could you proofread my English mistakes- Introduction

Question

Could you help me check my introduction, please.

Steps for how to deliver a good presentation

Since ninetees, my mom registered me at Icpna. My institute is a big building where I study with my classmates, I feel happy because I share good moments with my friends there. While I study in intermediate course, the teacher asked me to give a presentation, I do not know how to deliver a good presentation the first time but when I enter to Advanced course, I am able to deliver a good presentation. Delivering a good presentation, is a skill that helps students to suceed in the life. Also, deliver a good presentation, you can demonstrate the audience that you dominate the topic, I have said me that if you want to deliver a good impression, follow these steps before, during and after the presentation.

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Answer 1

In the nineties, my mom registered me at ICPNA. My institute is a big building where I study with my classmates. I feel happy because I share good moments with my friends there. While I studied in an intermediate course, the teacher asked me to give a presentation. I did not know how to deliver a good presentation the first time, but when I enter to Advanced course I was able to deliver a good presentation. Delivering a good presentation is a skill that helps students to suceed in life. Also, in delivering a good presentation, you can demonstrate to the audience that you dominate the topic. I have said that if you want to make a good impression, follow these steps before, during, and after the presentation.

Thanks Beatrice-Cod - maylegoas, Nov 12, 2011

Answer 2

ICPNA is:

The Instituto Cultural Peruano Norteamericano is an institution whose academic prestige in the teaching of American English is backed; by its broad methodological experience and highly qualified teaching staff, with teachers whose command of English is certified by the University of Michigan. This guarantees the required standard to offer the highest level of teaching for its students.

The teaching is carried out in well-equipped classrooms with computers and multimedia programs. As well as classroom activities, the ICPNA students have access to a Study Hall, bilingual library, and a free multimedia Self Access Center for reading, doing research, and additional practice.

Since ninetees, my mom registered me at Icpna. My institute is a big building where I study with my classmates, I feel happy because I share good moments with my friends there. While I study in intermediate course, the teacher asked me to give a presentation, I do not know how to deliver a good presentation the first time but when I enter to Advanced course, I am able to deliver a good presentation. Delivering a good presentation, is a skill that helps students to suceed in the life. Also, deliver a good presentation, you can demonstrate the audience that you dominate the topic, I have said me that if you want to deliver a good impression, follow these steps before, during and after the presentation.

In the nineties {period of time}, my mom registered me at ICPNA. My institute had(past tense since this was years ago} a big building {usually institutes have many buildings both big and small} where I studied with my classmates. I felt happy at the institute {"there" could be at the institute or in the classroom} because I shared good moments with my friends. {when speaking in the past, you need to remain in the past with your verbs}

When I was taking the intermediate course, the {or my} teacher asked me to give a presentation. I did not feel ready to give {more common than deliver but deliver is correct} a good presentation until I entered into the advanced course. Giving a good presentation is a skill that helps students, like myself, to succeed in life. Also, when giving a good presentation, you can demonstrate to the audience that you have taken the time to learn the topic well. I have told myself that if you want to make a good impression with your presentation, follow the these steps before, during, and after the presentation.

Answer 3

but when I entered Advanced course I was able to deliver a good presentation

can demonstrate to the audience that you know the topic.

Thanks SantoJorge - maylegoas, Nov 12, 2011