Please, could you proofread my English mistakes? 7

Question

Could you help me please?

In the end, It is important to teach to the young people that is very important to start from the beginning to study, so it es well known that who studied triumph. Rosita in short time she became a young Manager of the Company.

Thanks

Hi May - I suggested that you did as Jeezle suggests below - that way we can know exactly what you want to say. - - ian-hill, Nov 4, 2011

OK ian-hill I will for the next time - maylegoas, Nov 6, 2011

Answer 1

Por favor, escríbalo en español para que podamos ver lo que quieres decir realmente. Así es un poco difícil de entender.

Answer 2

Sanlee made a very good effort out of the hard task of finding out what the intended meaning was, as opposed to a cold transliteration.

But if I may change the part where it says "how to study from the beginning" to "to study from an early age," in tune with the valid question posed by jeezle:

But what does it mean "to study from the beginning"?

I think this is what was meant.

With a few other alterations, we get thus:

Finally, it is very important to teach young people to study from an early age because it is well known that those who study will triumph like Rosa, who, in a short space of time, became one of the youngest managers of the company.

Answer 3

Maybe you want to say something like this:

Finally, it is very important to teach young people how to study from the beginning, because it is well known that those who study will triumph like Rosa, who in a short time , became one of the youngest managers of the company.

But what does it mean "to study from the beginning"? - jeezzle, Nov 4, 2011