Please, could you proofread my English mistakes? 1

Question

At last came the long awaited day. It is at 6 o'clock of the morning, and Rosita; meanwhile, wake up herself thinks: "This is a wonderful and beautiful day and this being a bright sun; at last today, I will be a professional". Them, she remember the several different steps that she must follow to prepare this day, because she will give a little speech for being the first student of her promotion.

Thanks

Hola May - I think it would be good idea to also show us how you would write it in Spanish. That would remove any uncertainty we have. - ian-hill, Nov 4, 2011

OK ian-hill I´m going to write in Spanish. I know that it´s difficult understand me in English - maylegoas, Nov 4, 2011

90% of what you write is fine May - ian-hill, Nov 4, 2011

ian'hill, creo que ya no es necesario escribirlo en español, gracias - maylegoas, Nov 4, 2011

Answer 1

Hola May. Ojala que te ayuda esto:

At last came the long awaited day. It was 6 o'clock in the morning, and Rosita woke up thinking: "This is a wonderful and beautiful day, and the sun is shining brightly. At last, today, I will be a professional". Then, she remembered the several different steps that she must follow to prepare for this day, because she will have to give a little speech for being the first student (in her class?) to be promoted.

Gracias Jeremías, sé que tú me entiendes muy bien, ya lo iba a escribir en español, pensando que nadie me entendía - maylegoas, Nov 4, 2011

Jeremías, creo que mi problema fue que debí hacerlo en pasado. Estoy narrando de una estudiante que termina la Universidad y va ha sacar su titulo de bachiller. - maylegoas, Nov 4, 2011

Lo que sugiere Julian tambien esta bien. La diferencia principal es que en su version todo es en el presente, que funciana de igual. - Jeremias, Nov 4, 2011

ok thanks - maylegoas, Nov 4, 2011

Answer 2

Based on what I think you are trying to say, I would write it like this:

At last the long awaited day arrives. It is 6 o'clock in the morning and Rosita meanwhile awakens and thinks: "This is a wonderful and beautiful day with the sun shining brightly. Today, at least, I will be a professional." Then she remembers the several different steps that she must follow to prepare for this day because she will give a little speech for being the first student to be promoted.

thanks JulianChivi - maylegoas, Nov 4, 2011

Lo que me confude es la frase en que piensa del desarollo de su día ¿"en fin" o "por lo menos" será una profesional el día de hoy? - 005faa61, Nov 4, 2011

JulianChivi, si ella será una profesional el día de hoy. - maylegoas, Nov 4, 2011