Could you help me proofread my mistakes?

Question

Could you proofread my English mistakes?

Before a good presentation:

1. To do research about the topic.

2. To organize the mean points

3. To select the specific information.

4. To make an outline.

5. To write the first rough draft.

6. To polish and editing the written.

7. To make a final copy.

8. To study and practice infront of your friends in order to improve the speech.

9. To prepare a help memory with the main words to developed.

   During the presentation.

10. To greet with the best smile, while the master of ceremonies introduce him.

11. To start the presentation greeting to the audience and speaking clearly.

12. To keep eye contact with the audience.

13. Moving while speaking with total security oneself.

14. To stop in the main points, giving some examples.

15. To run the Power Point while the speaker is speaking.

16. To gave the audience some funny and interesting words to not bothering them.

17. Summarize the main point to conclude the speech.

    Thanks

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Answer 1

In Spanish, when you wish to list a set of instructional (commands) steps, you can use the verb infinitive. In English, I would recommend actually using the command form:

In order to make a good presentation:

1. Research the topic or Do research on the topic
2. Organize the main points.
3. Make an outine
4. Write an initial rough draft
5. Polish and edit (flesh out) the rough draft
6. Make a final copy
7. Study and practice in front of friends....etc.

Thanks a lot qfreed - maylegoas, Nov 3, 2011

nice :) - Kiwi-Girl, Nov 3, 2011