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Was two hours after middle night, his parents wait out nervous, his father want know the sex of baby, he expect one man that occupy his charge and position .
No one could imagine that he would be the most loved and most hated man in the world. His father had converted to Christianity to allow his work as lawyer, and to enroll his children in different educational levels.
The Moro used to go for a walk around the square where Jenny lived. Jenny was friend of Sofia who was the sister of his friend Edgar.
Jenny would be his great love, a love forbidden by the different social classes to which both belonged, she was daughter of a Baron, but the Moro was of middle class.
Jenny was tall, slender and brown hair, big eyes, and small mouth, with 22 years was a Marriage choice most valuable in the city of Tráveris.
At 17 years old, the Moro graduated from high school, El Moro leaved his secret love for to travel to Berlin to study laws at request of his father. A year later he wrote his father: “ And even the trip to Berlin that other provisions that I would have loved supremely, leave me cold. Because the rocks were more haughty saw that the feelings of my soul, nor the big cities, more alive than my blood, or more tables indigestible hosting package that I brought illusions, and art, in short, was not as beautiful as Jenny.”
In this feat of conquering Jenny his father was great friend to him, and his father in law respected him, for the incredible talent, his facility for languages, his interest for read and his philosophical arguments. Moreover, he knew too his daughter and understand this was a mature decision.
However, for his mother, Jenny was not the ideal woman, those young woman talked about art and philosophy, not seemed her inclined to the administration of a house.
The Moro no finished his law studies but he be graduated as doctor of Philosophy. Seven years later he married Jenny, spend their honeymoon in a small town where life was cheaper.
Their married life developed in exile, first Paris, then Belgium, after cologne and finally London. One year later was born their first daughter, two year later born Laura and after his loved son Edgar in honor to Jenny´s brother who that both support for marriage.
Jenny Wrote “ What really hurts me to the most intimate and makes me bleed my heart , is having to see my husband go through so many trances mean, see to him here alone without help from anyone. But he think otherwise, never, not in the most terrible moments, he dont loses security in the future, and to be more than happy not has more than to see me a little happy and the kids around me and making her poor mother caresses.
The love between the Moro and Jenny is one the most testing resisted in the time., they fell into poverty, in Chelsea were expulsed their apartment for nonpayment, then lived in germane cheaper Hotel, to pay debts pawned silver objects Jennys and finally it`s sold.
In one his letter The Moro wrote:
My heart's beloved:
There are many females in the world, and some among them are beautiful. But where could I find again a face, who’s every feature, even every wrinkle, is a reminder of the greatest and sweetest memories of my life? Even my endless pains, my irreplaceable losses I read in your sweet countenance, and I kiss away the pain when I kiss your sweet face...
Good-bye, my sweet heart. I kiss you and the children many thousand times.
Yours, Karl
One year and half old, the fifth girl died of bronchitis, The Moro suffered greatly during 3 days, a neighbor Jenny `s gif her 3 £ (Pounds sterling) with which she bought the coffin. Sixty five year lived the Moro, at two forty five at 14 of March in 1883, stopped to think the greater living thinker. His daughter called him MORO because of his black beard an long hair. In internet survey at 1999, Karl Hendrich Marx was named the man of millennium, today in United states, Italy, Mexico or Argentina scientific of all world has been studied to Marx and they has been amazed because his thinking.
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It was two hours after midnight (you could also say, “It was two in the morning,” or “two o’clock in the morning”), his parents were nervous, and his father wanted to know the sex of the baby. No one could imagine that he would be the most loved and most hated man in the world. His father had converted to Christianity to allow himself to work as a lawyer, and to enroll his children in different educational levels. The Moro used to go for walks around the square where Jenny lived. Jenny was friend of Sofia who was the sister of his friend Edgar. Jenny would be his great love, a love forbidden by the different social classes to which they both belonged, and she was the daughter of a Baron, but the Moro was a middle class person. Jenny was tall, slender and had brown hair, big eyes, and a small mouth. She was 22 years old and was a valuable choice for marriage in the city of Tráveris. At 17 years old, the Moro graduated from high school, and he left his secret love in order to travel to Berlin to study laws at the request of his father. A year later he wrote his father: “Even the trip to Berlin and other provisions that I would have loved supremely, leave me cold. Because the rocks were more haughty (< “Haughty” es una palabra incorrecta por esta oración. I don’t know what you are trying to say. Lo siento.) saw that the feelings of my soul, nor the big cities, more alive than my blood, or more tables indigestible hosting package that I brought illusions, and art, in short, was not as beautiful as Jenny.” In this feat of getting Jenny to love him, his father was great help to him, and his father-in-law respected him, for the incredible talent, his facility for languages, his interest for reading and his philosophical arguments. Moreover, he also knew his daughter and understood this was a mature decision. However, for his mother, Jenny was not the ideal woman, those young women that talked about art and philosophy did not seem inclined to the administration of a house. (Puede decir, “did not seem inclined to run a household.”) The Moro did not finish law school but he graduated as doctor of Philosophy. Seven years later he married Jenny, and they spent their honeymoon in a small town where life was cheaper. Their married life developed in exile, first Paris, then Belgium, after cologne (“Cologne” es una palabra incorrecta por esta oración.) and finally London. One year later their first daughter was born, two years later Laura was born and after her his beloved son Edgar was born in honor to Jenny´s brother who supported their marriage. Jenny wrote “What really hurts me intimately and makes my heart bleed, is having to see my husband go through so many mean situations, and to see him here alone without help from anyone. But he thinks that even in the most terrible moments, he won’t lose security, and he must be more than happy to see me and the kids happy." The love between the Moro and Jenny was tested by time. They fell into poverty, and in Chelsea they were evicted from their apartment for not paying their rent, and then they lived in cheap, German hotel. In order to pay their debts, they pawned silver objects of Jenny’s. In one letter The Moro wrote: “My heart's beloved: There are many females in the world, and some among them are beautiful. But where could I find again a face, who’s every feature, even every wrinkle, is a reminder of the greatest and sweetest memories of my life? Even my endless pains, my irreplaceable losses I read in your sweet countenance, and I kiss away the pain when I kiss your sweet face... Good-bye, my sweet heart. I kiss you and the children many thousand times. Yours, Karl” At the age of a year and a half, the fifth girl died (or daughter) of bronchitis, The Moro suffered greatly for 3 days, a neighbor Jenny `s gave her 3 £ (Pounds sterling) with which she bought the coffin. The Moro lived for sixty five years. At age forty five on the 14th of March in 1883, the greatest thinker died. His daughter called him MORO because of his black beard and long hair. In internet survey in 1999, Karl Hendrich Marx was named the man of millennium, today in United States, Italy, Mexico or Argentina, scientists of the world have studied the work of Karl Marx (or “have studied Marxism”) and they have been amazed because his thinking.
Espero que puedas comprender mis correciones. Algunas partes de este no están correcto, pero hizo muy bueno.
Great corrections from Carleyanna, just a few more thoughts.
his parents wait out nervous
you could say: his parents waited nervously,
Jenny was friend of Sofia
Jenny was a friend of Sofia
to study laws
to study law (no s)
A year later he wrote his father: “Even the trip to Berlin and other provisions that I would have loved supremely, leave me cold. Because the rocks were more haughty (< “Haughty” es una palabra incorrecta por esta oración. I don’t know what you are trying to say. Lo siento.) saw that the feelings of my soul, nor the big cities, more alive than my blood, or more tables indigestible hosting package that I brought illusions, and art, in short, was not as beautiful as Jenny.”
A year later he wrote to his father “Even the trip to Berlin, and other occasions that I should have loved supremely, left me cold. Because even the haughty rocks which saw the feelings in my soul, and the big cities, more alive than my blood, or more tables hosting indigestible packages of illusions, and art, in short, were not as beautiful as Jenny.” (This was hard, I am not sure I have captured your meaning)
In this feat of getting Jenny to love him, his father was great help to him, and his father-in-law respected him, for the incredible talent, his facility for languages, his interest for reading and his philosophical arguments.
In the task of getting Jenny to love him, his father was a great help to him, and his father-in-law respected him, for his incredible talent, his facility for languages, his interest in reading and his philosophical arguments.
The Moro did not finish law school but he graduated as doctor of Philosophy
Moro did not finish law school but he graduated as a Doctor of Philosophy (You wouldn’t usually say the Moro in English just Moro,)
after cologne
after Cologne ( I assume this is the city so it should have a capital letter)
and after her his beloved son Edgar was born in honor to Jenny´s brother who supported their marriage.
and after her his beloved son Edgar who was named in honor of Jenny´s brother who supported their marriage.
then they lived in cheap, German hotel.
then they lived in a cheap, German hotel.
Moro suffered greatly for 3 days, a neighbor Jenny `s gave her 3 £ (Pounds sterling) with which she bought the coffin. The Moro lived for sixty five years. At age forty five on the 14th of March in 1883, the greatest thinker died.
Moro suffered greatly for 3 days, a neighbor of Jenny`s gave her £3 (Pounds sterling) with which she bought the coffin. Moro lived for sixty five years. At age sixty five on the 14th of March in 1883, the greatest thinker died. (Was he forty five or sixty five, you used both? )
In internet survey in 1999, Karl Hendrich Marx was named the man of millennium, today in United States, Italy, Mexico or Argentina, scientists of the world have studied the work of Karl Marx (or “have studied Marxism”) and they have been amazed because his thinking.
In an internet survey in 1999, Karl Hendrich Marx was named the man of the millennium, today in the United States, Italy, Mexico and Argentina, scientists of the world have studied the work of Karl Marx (or “have studied Marxism”) and they have been amazed by his thinking.
I hope that helps a little.
Gracias, Carleyana, Muchisimas Gracias
