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He escrito un capitulo en esta libro. Mi pedazo es en pagina 144. Decirme tú lo sobre qué crees?
I have written a chapter in this book. My piece is on page 144. Tell me what you think
Thank you
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updated Oct 10, 2011
posted by Wannalearn
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He escrito un capítulo en este libro. Puedes verlo en la página 144 (mi capítulo está en la página 144). Dame tu opinión (cuéntame que piensas)!
That's just a couple suggestions to make it sound nicer. There were a couple errors este libro is masculine, pedazo is not the best word, es should be está, and the last sentance needs a command (dime) and a little simplification.
Hopefully this helps!
updated Oct 10, 2011
posted by unMica
unmica thanks for your time and suggestiobs. - Wannalearn, Oct 10, 2011
you're welcome! - unMica, Oct 10, 2011
