I am learning English. Is this correct? Thank you.

Question

I am tall, I am pretty and intelligent, my sister is tall . she is stupid

Welcome to the forum, :) - 00494d19, Oct 4, 2011

Welcome to the forum! - 00b6f46c, Oct 4, 2011

¡Hola, Luisa y bienvenida al foro! I hope you don't mind that I corrected your title. I changed inglish to English and added some punctuation and capitalization. (We have people learning English here). - sanlee, Oct 4, 2011

hi!!!thank you, very much - LuisaCorrales, Oct 5, 2011

Answer 1

They are correct, but they should be separate sentences:

I am tall.

I am pretty and intelligent.

My sister is tall.

She is stupid.

And it is English, not "inglish".

thank you , very much. - LuisaCorrales, Oct 4, 2011

Answer 2

So there you have the answers to your grammar but we really can't say if it is true about you or your sister. Welcome to the forum!

thank you - LuisaCorrales, Oct 5, 2011

Answer 3

I am tall, I am pretty and intelligent, my sister is tall . she is stupid ...is ok but I would write

I am tall, pretty and intelligent (but) / (whereas) my sister is tall and stupid.

(but) (whereas) are conjunctions that link parts of a sentence.

thank you - LuisaCorrales, Oct 5, 2011

Answer 4

With the exception "she" lacking a capital S, and a period at the end of the second sentence, it is correct.

And the correct spelling of inglés is English.

thank you - LuisaCorrales, Oct 5, 2011