Help me with writing a sentence

Question

here's the sentense: No tengo mis zapatos. can I write it like this: tengo no mis zapatos.

Answer 1

That seems like "I have not my shoes"...hmmm, that sounds wrong.

It's standard to write the negative word (in this case, no) before the verb (tengo).

Answer 2

can I write it like this: tengo no mis zapatos.

No, this is incorrect.

No tengo mis zapatos / No traigo zapatos / No llevo zapatos / etc.

If you don´t want to use No, you would have to use a verb that indicates negative action such as "Me faltan los zapatos."