please proof read the following sentence

Question

here is the sentence " application of these methods in stores in San Diego and Cinncinati have resulted in violence there,according at the developers if the security system,Hanover brothrs,Inc.

Answer 1

application of these methods in stores in San Diego and Cinncinati have resulted in violence there,according at the developers if the security system,Hanover brothrs,Inc

Application of these methods in stores in San Diego and Cincinnati has resulted in violence there ("in these locations" is better than "there", if that is what you are trying to say), according to the developers of the security system, Hanover Brothers, Inc.

Are you sure you meant to use the word violence? Without context, it's hard to imagine what that would mean. But it could make sense given the proper context. In any case the sentence is now proper English.

Fixed a tiny typo, Jeremias -- hope you don't mind? :-) - territurtle, Sep 23, 2011

Woops!! Actually fixed it in the quoted part. Will change it back immediately! ¡Lo siento! - territurtle, Sep 23, 2011

Answer 2

here is the sentence " application of these methods in stores in San Diego and Cinncinati have resulted in violence there,according at the developers if the security system,Hanover brothrs,Inc