Please, Help me this Email Its correct the grammar??

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Dear Denisse:

Thank you very much for the wonderfull present. You know I love playing basquetball. I really love it. I hope see you soon to play basketball as before. How are you and Marco? I heard you're getting married in December.. Congratulations friend ¡¡¡ I remember when we were kids and told me never want to marry not only wanted to play basketball after school. I wish that you go very well in your marriage. Yali and I are getting married in two years, we have many plans. You are invited the wedding. Next week I will call you to go to play basketball, hope that we will meet again. Love and kisses Leonor

Answer 1

Dear Denisse:

Thank you very much for the wonderfull present. You know I love playing basquetball. I really love it. I hope to see you soon to play basketball as before.

How are you and Marco? I heard you're getting married in December. Congratulations, friend!!

I remember when we were kids and you told me that you never wanted to get married because you only wanted to play basketball after school. I wish that all goes very well in your marriage.

Yali and I are getting married in two years and we have many plans. You are invited to the wedding.

Next week I will call you to go and play basketball. Hope that we will meet again. Love and kisses.

Leonor

You did a great job on this! I made only a few changes. - --Mariana--, Sep 22, 2011

thanks a lot ¡¡¡ have a great day :D ¡¡¡ - leonor24, Sep 22, 2011