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My little brother is addicted to junk foods. For example, Bugles and Doritos. AIf something is good for him, he won't eat it.

(Correct the fragment by adding the subject and verb he craves.)

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updated Sep 18, 2011
posted by blonnndieyy
can you help me please and thank you - blonnndieyy, Sep 18, 2011

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What?

"Alf something" doesn't make sense.

And this suspicious sounds like homework. We don't do homework for you, but would be happy to correct your tries.

updated Sep 18, 2011
posted by Felixlynx
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My little brother is addicted to junk foods. For example, Bugles and Doritos. AIf something is good for him, he won't eat it.

My little brother is addicted to junk foods like Bugles and Doritos. If something is good for him, he won't eat it.

updated Sep 18, 2011
posted by SonrisaDelSol
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For example, he craves Bugle and Doritos, if something is good for him, he wont eat it.

Yes, this is almost correct English. Good job! smile

Seperate the sentences.

....Bugles and Doritos. If something is..

updated Sep 18, 2011
edited by Felixlynx
posted by Felixlynx
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My little brother is addicted to junk foods. For example, Bugles and Doritos. AIf something is good for him, he won't eat it.

(Correct the fragment by adding the subject and verb he craves.)

is this the right answer For example, he craves Bugle and Doritos, if something is good for him, he wont eat it.

updated Sep 18, 2011
posted by blonnndieyy