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My father has somes nervous habits.

My father has somes nervous habits.

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help me with this sentence

My father has somes nervous habits. For instance, folding a strip of paper into the shape of an acordion.

(i need you to tell me how to correct the fraagment by adding the subject he and changing folding to the proper form of the verb, folds.) in the sentence above.

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updated Sep 18, 2011
edited by --Mariana--
posted by blonnndieyy
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My father has somes nervous habits.

My father has some nervous habits.

Some is never plural. It has a homonym that can be used in a plural form, but never this "some".

For instance, folding a strip of paper into the shape of an acordion

Here is how I would say it...

For instance, he folds a strip of paper into the shape of an accordion.

I added in he folds, as you requested. "Folding" is not correct here. We need the present tense, not a gerund. So, our subject is "father". We don't have to say "father" again as it has already been established, so we insert our masculine singular subject pronoun, which is he. Then I change "folding" to the proper form of the verb "fold". Since our subject "he" is masculine and singular, our verb has to be in the third-person singular form as well, which is folds. Also, I changed the spelling of "acordion" to "accordion", which is correct.

updated Sep 18, 2011
edited by SonrisaDelSol
posted by SonrisaDelSol
what about my father has some nervous habits. - blonnndieyy, Sep 18, 2011
You had "somes". It should have been "some". - SonrisaDelSol, Sep 18, 2011