Que hice hoy

Question

Ok, so I need to make legitimate attempts at writing in Spanish (regular daily attempts). If you care to look it over and make corrections I would be very greatful. You don't have to go over each line if you don't feel like it... GENERAL COMMENTS are also very welcome!!! I will be upfront about one thing right now: I'm less concerned with accent marks. Point them out and I will take note, but I'm more concerned with structure and verb conjugation. I wrote this with minimal reference to the translator and/or guides.

Comí desayuno a las nueve de la manana. Entonces, miré a la programa de television por aproximadamente tres horas. Estaba interumpiendo porque mi amigo me llamó. Fuimos a WalMart. Desde entonces, aprendí Espanol y durmí un poco. Esta noche, voy a ir a la fiesta y beber mucho. Esta era mi dia.

What I'm trying to say (more or less): I ate breakfast at 9 in the morning. Then, I watched TV for about 3 hours. I was interrupted because my friend called me. We went to WalMart. Then, I learned Spanish and slept a little. Tonight, I am going to a party to drink alot.

Ok, thanks much if you care to pick through this,

Answer 1

Comí desayuno Desayuné a las nueve de la mañana. Entonces , miré la televisión por [aproximadamente] tres horas. Me interrumpió mi amigo**, que** me llamó. Fuimos a WalMart. Desde Entonces , aprendí español y dormí un poco. Esta noche , voy a ir a una fiesta y beber mucho. Este fue mi día.

thanks much!! - steric, Aug 25, 2011

Answer 2

Ok. Here's my thought. Most of what you wrote looks good to me. Really good! Of course, like you, I'm still learning. I only wonder about

"Entonces, miré a la programa..."

Something about the "a" doesn't sound right to me. Isn't it like saying that you considered the program a person?

-Mateo

Now that I look at it again.... I agree with you! Thanks much for taking the time to read this! - steric, Aug 25, 2011

Absolutely! Thanks for the oportunity, steric. - _Mateo_, Aug 25, 2011