could you help me proofread my English mistakes ? Topic Sentences 4
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Movies are interesting for several functions nowadays.
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updated Aug 16, 2011
posted by maylegoas
another - lorenzo9, Aug 16, 2011
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Movies are interesting for several functions nowadays.
Functions doesn't really work here. I suggest you use "reasons", instead.
Movies are interesting for several reasons nowadays.
Also, since you are using the term "nowadays", you seem to be comparing it to some other time. So, I suggest you use more in front of interesting.
Movies are more interesting for several reasons nowadays. 
Bien hecho, Mayle!!!!
updated Aug 16, 2011
edited by SonrisaDelSol
posted by SonrisaDelSol
thanks SonrisaDelSo - maylegoas, Aug 16, 2011
No problem!! - SonrisaDelSol, Aug 16, 2011
