could you help me proofread my English mistakes ? Topic Sentences 3
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This is a Topic Sentence
Some advertising requires control and censorship.
Thanks
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updated Aug 16, 2011
edited by gintar77
posted by maylegoas
Changed category. - gintar77, Aug 16, 2011
I don't understand what you want to say. - maylegoas, Aug 16, 2011
You had your question under the "Vocabulary and Grammar" category, but Gintar changed it the "Proof Reading" category. - SonrisaDelSol, Aug 16, 2011
OK SonrisaDelSo - maylegoas, Aug 16, 2011
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Some advertising requires control and censorship.
Absolutely perfect!
A really tiny change would be: "Some types of advertising require control and censorship." However, that is completely optional.
Your sentence is perfect as it is.
¡Estoy muy orgullosa!
updated Aug 16, 2011
edited by SonrisaDelSol
posted by SonrisaDelSol
thanks SonrisaDelSo - maylegoas, Aug 16, 2011
I'd say.. Certain types of..... - SpanishPal, Aug 16, 2011
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I think the original sentence is perfect, but I can understand why some people would say it differently.
updated Aug 16, 2011
posted by lorenzo9
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The sentence could be said in other ways but it is perfect as it is.
updated Aug 16, 2011
posted by MaryMcc
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i am prode
updated Aug 16, 2011
posted by nelsonortiz
I don't understand what you want to say. - maylegoas, Aug 16, 2011
No one else does either :) - lorenzo9, Aug 16, 2011
Perhaps you mean "proud"? I am proud...? - SonrisaDelSol, Aug 16, 2011
