Ode to the chocolate bar
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Ode to "the chocolate bar"
the factory...
made you like this,
chocolate bar,
as smooth as velvet
and it is your faith,
you accumulation of desire,
being ravened
in the hands
of your admirer.
long live chocolate
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updated Jul 22, 2011
edited by dewclaw
posted by dewclaw
Thank goodness I had some chocolate ready when I read this! - rabbitwho, Jul 22, 2011
"your accumulation..." no? - pesta, Jul 22, 2011
"the factory" - pesta, Jul 22, 2011
Why is this "Vocabulary & Grammar"? Did you hope for a translation? Or a discussion? - pesta, Jul 22, 2011
no. you accumulation of desire, that's what I meant - dewclaw, Jul 22, 2011
2 Answers
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updated Jul 22, 2011
posted by LaloLoco
Me too!! ;) - territurtle, Jul 22, 2011
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Ravened ? Do you mean ravished ?
YouR accumulation of desire, I suppose not "you" ?
updated Jul 22, 2011
edited by Stig345
posted by Stig345
