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Ode to the Onion

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I thought that this ,"Ode to the Onion ,was a beautiful piece of prose ,as penned by the great poet Pablo Neruda.

"Oda a la CeBolla""Ode to the Onion"
...la tierra ....the earth
asi te hizo, made you like this,
cebolla, onion,
clara como un planeta, clear as a planet
y destinada and destined
constelacíon constante, a constant constellation
redonda rosa de agua round rose of water
sobre on
La mesa the table
de las pobres gentes of the poor people
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updated Jul 23, 2011
edited by 0074b507
posted by Jadine
Edited the formatting for you, think it's closer to what you wanted like this. But you can change it back if you want! - rabbitwho, Jul 22, 2011
Oops! I may have overwritten your edit. We were doing it at the same time. - 0074b507, Jul 22, 2011
OOOOOOOOoooo yours is MUCH better qfreed, I bow before your superior editing skills! - rabbitwho, Jul 22, 2011
Well done to you both rabbitwho y gfreed, that was exactly what i wanted doing Jadine - Jadine, Jul 22, 2011
it's so lovely - dewclaw, Jul 22, 2011

4 Answers

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Don't forget Oda al Gato


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updated Jul 23, 2011
posted by LaloLoco
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I am inclined to agree with you, it brings it down to earth, Jadine

updated Jul 22, 2011
posted by Jadine
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"Oda a la CeBolla" "Ode to the Onion" ...la tierra ....asi te hizo, cebolla, clara como un planeta, y destinada constelacíon constante,redonda rosa de agua sobre la mesa de las pobres gentes

updated Jul 22, 2011
posted by dewclaw
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Thank you ,for drawing my attention, to your wondrous y captivating "Oda al Gato." I could study this ,all day long ,and perhaps end up ,speaking Spanish fluently? Seriously ,you have given me a few ideas, Thanks. Jadine.

updated Jul 23, 2011
edited by Jadine
posted by Jadine