Advertisment for English Classes

Question

I want to advertise locally for English classes, because my new school can't offer me as many hours as I need to live. So I thought if I could even get a handful of private classes going it'd help me pay the bills. This ad will be on a local website, and I'll print out signs with a much shorter version of it and put them around the city and the university. Really appreciate any help from any of our lovely members, advice with mistakes in Spanish or even advice on how to make it appealing.

I saw another teacher was charging 18/23 euro a lesson, and she probably wants people to buy their own books, so I think my price is fair, even if she has a lot more experience than I do.

Thanks a lot to anyone who can give me any help at all!

LECCIONES PRIVADAS DE INGLÉS

Soy una hablante nativo de Inglés con tres años de experiencia en el trabajo en escuelas de idiomas como una profesora cualificada. También tengo experiencia en ayuda para los estudiantes que están preparando para las examinas de Cambridge.

Enseño todos niveles y años. En mi casa o la suya. €15 una hora por una persona €20 una hora por dos personas (Si tiene un amigo que tiene la misma nivel de Inglés como usted)

No hay que comprar libros si no quiere, los materiales puede ser incluidos.

PRIVATE ENGLISH LESSONS

I'm a native English speaker from Ireland with 3 years experience working in language schools as a qualified teacher. I also have experience helping students who are preparing for the Cambridge exams. I teach all levels and ages, in my house or yours.

€15 an hour for 1 person €20 an hour for 2 people (If you have who has the same level of English as you)

You don't have to buy books if you don't want to, the materials can be included.

lecciones privadas - samdie, Jul 22, 2011

Thanks! - rabbitwho, Jul 22, 2011

los examenes - pesta, Jul 22, 2011

los materiales puedeN ser - pesta, Jul 22, 2011

You might want to review how rates are expressed. It may be, "€15 por hora ..." - pesta, Jul 22, 2011

"(If you have a friend who..." - pesta, Jul 22, 2011

Wupps! Thanks pesta, I can always use help with my English! :D - rabbitwho, Jul 22, 2011

Answer 1

LECCIONES PRIVADAS DE INGLÉS

Soy una hablante nativa de Inglés con tres años de experiencia trabajando en escuelas de idiomas como una profesora calificada. También tengo experiencia ayudando a los estudiantes que se están preparando para los exámenes de Cambridge.

Enseño todos los niveles y años. En mi casa o la suya. €15 una hora por una persona €20 una hora por dos personas (Si tiene un amigo que tenga el mismo nivel de inglés que usted)

No hay que comprar libros si no quiere, los materiales pueden ser incluidos.

Oh my goodness thank you so much Dakie! You fixed the whole thing for me! :D Do you think it's okay to spell it cualificado in Spain? http://www.wordreference.com/es/translation.asp?tranword=qualified < I found the word there, but never saw it before. - rabbitwho, Jul 22, 2011

Well, it is certainly a weird word here but it says that it's ok in Spain so I guess yes, a short PM to Heidi won´t be bad - Dakie, Jul 22, 2011

;) - Dakie, Jul 22, 2011

inglés is not capitalized. - 0074b507, Jul 22, 2011

good catch, thanks ;) - Dakie, Jul 22, 2011