Could you please proofread my mistakes? I'm using transition signals.

Question

The focus sentence is Sometimes I enjoy being alone.

Sometimes I enjoy being alone for instance when I have to study like today because I have exam. Moreover I am a person that prefer to be alone to meditate and I fell specially well because I can pray and felling close to my son who is with God. On the other hand I have to do many things and unless a little time to be alone I would not study, This does not mean that I am unsociable, no I like to be specially with my family, but I need a time to be alone, this is important to me. Therefore I need my space specially to study and I enjoy to do this.

Thanks.

I will!! Give me a few minutes to read through it, and I'll post my response :D - SonrisaDelSol, Jul 13, 2011

Answer 1

Sometimes I enjoy being alone for instance when I have to study like today because I have exam. Moreover I am a person that prefer to be alone to meditate and I fell specially well because I can pray and felling close to my son who is with God. On the other hand I have to do many things and unless a little time to be alone I would not study, This does not mean that I am unsociable, no I like to be specially with my family, but I need a time to be alone, this is important to me. Therefore I need my space specially to study and I enjoy to do this.

Sometimes I enjoy being alone. For instance, when I have to study, like today, for an exam. Moreover, I am a person who prefers to be alone to meditate, that makes me feel especially well because I can pray and feel close to my son who is with God. On the other hand, I have many things to do and unless I have a little time on my own I wouldn't be able to study. That doesn't mean I am unsociable, in fact I like to be around people specially with my family but I only need some time to be alone. That is important to me because I need my space particularly to study which I enjoy a lot.

Answer 2

Sometimes I enjoy being alone for instance when I have to study like today because I have exam. Moreover I am a person that prefer to be alone to meditate and I fell specially well because I can pray and felling close to my son who is with God.

Sometimes, I enjoy being alone. For instance, I like to be alone when I study for an exam. Moreover, I am a person that prefers to be alone to meditate. I feel especially well when I pray because I feel close to my son, who is with God.

On the other hand I have to do many things and unless a little time to be alone I would not study, This does not mean that I am unsociable, no I like to be specially with my family, but I need a time to be alone, this is important to me. Therefore I need my space specially to study and I enjoy to do this.

I have to do many things and unless a little time to be alone I would not study, This phrase is a little confusing, so I made a few changes.

On the other hand, I have to do many things and rarely have time to be alone and study. This does not mean that I am unsociable. I like to be around people, especially with my family. However, to me, it is important to have time alone. Therefore, I need my space, especially to do things I enjoy, like studying.

I made quite a few changes so the sentences "flow" a little bit better. Please PM me if you have any questions. Bien hecho! Great work. Your English is very good.

thanks SonrisaDelSo, I fell good when you response me. - maylegoas, Jul 13, 2011

what is PM? - maylegoas, Jul 13, 2011

You're welcome. One thing I noticed in your paragraph is that you confuse "feel" and "fell", as you just did in your comment. Be careful with those :) - SonrisaDelSol, Jul 13, 2011

A PM is a personal message. The link to send a PM can be found on any user's profile (if they have that function enabled). - SonrisaDelSol, Jul 13, 2011

I **felt** good when you **responded to** me :) - SonrisaDelSol, Jul 13, 2011