Could you proofread the text for my mistakes? Concluding sentences

Question

Is it OK these sentences in English?

Finally, we can say technology is good, but if we make of it a good use.

In Spanish: Nosotros podemos decir que la tecnología es buena, siempre y cuando le demos un buen uso.

As a result, actually tecnology makes workers work as fast as it advance.

In Spanish: Como resultado, actualmente la tecnología hace trabajar a los trabajadores tan rápido como ésta avanza.

As a result, the tips before mentioned make a good listener.

In Spanish: Como resultado, los tips arriba mencionados hacen un buen oyente.

In brief, you can be a good listener if you follow these advises.

Spanish: Ud. puede ser un buen oyente si sigue estos consejos.

Thanks

Answer 1

Is it OK these sentences in English?
Are these sentences in English OK

Finally, we can say technology is good, but if we make of it a good use. Finally we can say technology is good, but only if we make good use of it.

In Spanish: Nosotros podemos decir que la tecnología es buena, siempre y cuando le demos un buen uso.

As a result, actually tecnology makes workers work as fast as it advance. **As a result technology makes worker faster as it advances **

In Spanish: Como resultado, actualmente la tecnología hace trabajar a los trabajadores tan rápido como ésta avanza.

As a result, the tips before mentioned make a good listener. As a result the previous tips will make you a good listener

In Spanish: Como resultado, los tips arriba mencionados hacen un buen oyente.

In brief, you can be a good listener if you follow these advises. In brief, you can become a good listener if you follow this advice

Spanish: Ud. puede ser un buen oyente si sigue estos consejos.

Thanks

My suggestions are in bold. I have tried to stick as closely as possible to your own translation. I hope I have conveyed your meaning correctly.

Answer 2

We can say that technology is good, provided we put it to a good use.

As a result, the tips mentioned above make a good listener.

You can be a good listener if you follow this advice.

Espero que esto sea una ayuda para ti.

J

Yes it is Jeremias. Thanks. - maylegoas, Jul 7, 2011