Could you proofread the text for my mistakes?

Question

These are four Topic sentences.

1. Working a made a good advertising agency.
2. Your advertising helped to my business
3. Your advertising are a necessity for me.
4. Going to the movies is good for several families in problems.

Thanks you

¿Por qué no pones lo que quieres decir en español a ver si podemos ayudarte corregir el inglés? - gintar77, Jul 6, 2011

OK gintar77 Yo quiero hacer cuatro Topic sentences y en cada uno considerar su controlling ideas - maylegoas, Jul 6, 2011

gintar77 1. Trabajando hice una buena agencia de publicidad. 2. Tu publicidad ayudó a mi negocio. 3. Tu publicidad es necesaria para mí. 4. Ir al cine es bueno para muchas familias en problemas. - maylegoas, Jul 6, 2011

gintar77 I sent you the sentences in Spanish - maylegoas, Jul 6, 2011

Answer 1

In my work I created a great advertising agency. Your advertising helped my business. I need your advertising. Going to the movies is good for many families with problems.

This is putting your words in common English vernacular as best I can understand your meaning.

Thanks ribower - maylegoas, Jul 6, 2011

Estoy de acuerdo. - gintar77, Jul 6, 2011