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Can you please proofread the text for my mistakes

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They are three topic sentences, Could you check , please?

  1. There are three persons to go to the movies.
  2. I prefer the Americans movies.
  3. We go three times at month to the movies.
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updated Jul 6, 2011
posted by maylegoas

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There are three persons to go to the movies.

There are three people going to the movies.

Sounds more like: There will be three people going to the movies.

I prefer the Americans movies.

I prefer American movies.

We go three times at month to the movies.

We go to the movies three times a month.

updated Jul 12, 2011
edited by 0074b507
posted by 0074b507
thanks gfree, - maylegoas, Jul 6, 2011