Whats up....Que Pasa?
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Wasup? My name is Ty. I'm mad bored. I'm Spanish & Black. I'm pretty & smart.
Que Pasa? Mi nombre Ty. Estoy aburrida. Estoy espanol y negro. Estoy bonita y inteligente.
Lol. Sorry...I'm just trying to practice
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updated Jun 24, 2011
edited by SonrisaDelSol
posted by dimplelove
I hope you don't mind my edit :) Just remember to use proper capitalization and grammar on the forum - some people are learning English, and we don't want to confuse them. Thanks again, amiga. Bienvenida :D - SonrisaDelSol, Jun 24, 2011
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Qué tal?... Mi nombre es Ty... Estoy aburrida... Soy española, soy negra, Soy bonita e inteligente...
Well done, so continue.
Good luck.
updated Jun 24, 2011
edited by tomasxenix
posted by tomasxenix
Excellent, but "española" should not be capitalized. - gintar77, Jun 24, 2011
Also, you need a ¿ in front of the question and "qué" needs an accent mark. - gintar77, Jun 24, 2011
thanks. - tomasxenix, Jun 24, 2011
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Very good. I'm just going to make a few changes.
¿Qué pasa? Me llamo Ty. Estoy aburrida. Soy española y negra. Soy bonita e inteligente.
Overall, good! Hope I helped 
[Edited at Sonrisa's request]
updated Jun 24, 2011
edited by gintar77
posted by SonrisaDelSol
O H M Y G O O D N E S S. My post is very incorrect. I used "Estar"?????? Where is my brain?!?!?! - SonrisaDelSol, Jun 24, 2011
I've reached my maximum edits for the day...eek...bad timing!! - SonrisaDelSol, Jun 24, 2011
PM me with your changes and I'll make them. :-) - gintar77, Jun 24, 2011
Ah, gracias! - SonrisaDelSol, Jun 24, 2011
Gracias, gracias, gracias ! - SonrisaDelSol, Jun 24, 2011
Fue un placer :-) - gintar77, Jun 24, 2011
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updated Jun 24, 2011
posted by HotChickCD
