Anyone fancy translating this into English?
I translated this into English for a friend, but I'm not happy with my translation. If anyone can offer me a better translation than mine, I'm sure there'll be a free massage in it for you. No need to correct any errors in Spanish.
Un buen y excelente masaje en una sesión de una hora, en la comodidad de tu domicilio u hotel .Masajes relajantes y descontracturantes.Suaves o fuertes mediantes Técnicas combinadas que te dara una tranquilidad te Relajara, aliviara del stress, cansancio acumulado, pesadez, insomnio, congestión muscular, a la vez que tonifica músculos y te dara un total relajamiento,fisico y mental, Duración: 1 hora. Utililizando música instrumental, incienso, aceites naturales con diferentes fragancias a escoger, y una excelente técnica. Empleando palma de mano, yema de dedos, codo, nudillos. Material disponible a domicilio y hoteles previa cita: camilla portátil profesional para masajes, toallas, aceites, incienso, CD con música relajante
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Tag, this is not a translation service , sorry, unless you provide your own attempt, no can do
Yo diría:
A fantastic massage in a one-hour session in the comfort of your home or hotel. Relaxing massages and relief from aches and pains. Pressure from gentle to strong at your preference while employing techniques that will give you tranquility and relax you. This will have the effect of alleviating stress, accumulated fatigue, obesity, insomnia, muscular congestion, at the same time as toning the muscles and giving you total relaxation, physical and mental. Duration: one hour. Using instrumental music, incense, a choice of natural oils with different fragrances and excellent technique. Employing the palm of the hand, the finger tips, elbow, knuckles. Materials available at home and hotels by prior appointment: professional portable bed for massages, towels, oils, incense, CD with relaxing music.
No es una traducción directa, pero creo que es lo que quieres decir. La traducción tuya está bien tambien y a mi me parece casi perfecto.
¡Suerte!
Aaron
Here's my version.
A great and excellent massage in a one-hour session in the comfort of your home or hotel. Relaxing massages and cramp relief. Smooth or strong by means of combined techniques that will give you tranquility and relax you, alleviating stress, accumulated fatigue, obesity, insomnia, muscular, muscular congestion, at the same time as toning the muscles and giving you total relaxation, physical and mental. Duration: one hour. Using instrumental music, incense, a choice of natural oils with difference fragrances and excllent technique. Employing the palm of the hand, the finger tips, elbow, knuckles. Material available at home and hotels by prior appointment: professional portable bed for massages, towels, oils, incense, CD with relaxing music.
