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Proof-read please?

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If I say...Si digo... "Viviré lejos de esta ciudad y dejaré los fantasmas de lo que nunca será y lo que no existe nada más " does that translate as "I'll live far from here and leave behind the ghosts of what will never be and what is no more." I'm not going for an exact translation, I'm going for along-the-lines-of. The bold part is what I'm especially worried about THANKS!!!!

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updated Jun 9, 2011
posted by bailarina95
I will live far from this city...dejaré atrás=leave behind - 0074b507, Jun 8, 2011

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I would say..."de lo que núnca será y de lo que no existe núnca más".

updated Jun 8, 2011
posted by 00a4c226
nunca...the word is "grave" stress falls where you have it accented naturally. - 0074b507, Jun 8, 2011
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lo que nunca será y lo que no existe nada más

I would say:

de lo que nunca será y de lo que ya no es.

updated Jun 9, 2011
posted by LuisCache