Can someone check my conjugation and fix it?
Please conjugate 
I think I did it right, but I need a double check on thyis paragraph.
Mi deporte favorito es corriente . Yo corro mucho en la escuela. Yo corro mucho porque me corro muy bien. Todos los días después de la escuela yo corro estar en bien estada. Yo sentirse muy alegre cuando yo corro. Yo mirar gente corro en televisor en mis la sala en mis el sofá. Yo amor a corro.
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The fifth sentence needs conjugation correction: "Me siento muy feliz cuando corra." I used the subjunctive tense for the second verb in that sentence because it's something that you're talking about doing but haven't actually done. I assume you haven't learned about that tense however and wont for a while so i wouldn't worry about that.
Glad you posted that. I was misreading the mood of the verb in another correction.
Me siento muy feliz cuando corra.
The subjunctive mood is used following cuando [time adverb} when what follows is an anticipated situation (future time).
The indicative mood is used following cuando when what follows is completed or habitual. I would consider this a habitual action.
Me siento muy feliz cuando corro.
examples from article
Por lo general lo hago cuando nos levantamos. I usually do it when we get up. [Indicative...habitual]
Lo haré cuando nos levantemos. I'll do it when we get up.
[Subjunctive...anticipated action]
Of course, every grammar rule has exceptions. Here is one:
Of course, if there is no change of subject involved and a preposition is available, typically the preposition is used with an infinitive.
There seems to be no subject change here so:
Me siento muy feliz al correr... may be the more grammatically correct sentence.
Here's what I've got for ya:
I assume you mean to use "corriente" as running but i would double check that as it is commonly used as an adjective to describe running water, etc. Try using the word "carrera" instead, which means a race. "Correr" should be fine as well.
A runner is a corredor/ -ora so you could try formulating a sentence around that as well. Is it cross-country or long-distance running? Knowing those things will help you make a longer (if you need more length for the paper) and a more grammatically correct sentence.
The second sentence could then say something like "I'm am on the running team at my school" = "Estoy en un equipo de carrera en mi escuela."
Try adding a little vocabulary to the third sentence. "Corro mucho porque soy un corredor con talento" = "I run a lot because I am a talented runner."
The fourth sentence could be rephrased as well: "I run everyday, after school to maintain good health." = "Corro todos los días, después de la escuela para mantener en bien salud."
The fifth sentence needs conjugation correction: "Me siento muy feliz cuando corra." I used the subjunctive tense for the second verb in that sentence because it's something that you're talking about doing but haven't actually done. I assume you haven't learned about that tense however and wont for a while so i wouldn't worry about that.
The last two sentences need a lot of fixing: "Miro la gente corriendo en la televisión en la sala, en el sofá. Me encanta correr."
Just a note: Using Yo is usually not necessary when you've already conjugated the verb correctly.
Good Luck!
PS. For future reference, here's a little cheat sheet that I used during my schooling days: http://www.conjugation.org/ It can be super useful in a bind.
delete- already corrected
Mi deporte favorito es correr . Yo corro mucho en la escuela. Yo corro mucho porque corro muy bien. Todos los días después de la escuela yo corro para estar en buen salud y bienestar. Me siento muy alegre cuando yo corre. Yo miro la gente corriendo en la televisión en la sala en el sofá. Me encanta correr.
you no need many 'yo' y you have to conjugate
Hi Kataregirl, Welcome to the forum. You can go over your own conjugation by using the dropdown under "More" up in the toolbar. One thing I can tell you is once you've gotten it right you'll be able to get rid of all those subject pronouns you have there.
