Special parent and child moment, please help me translate :)

Question

i want to say " once you see your daughter for the first time i know you will fall in love with her and cherish every moment you spend together " in spanish but cant get the grammar right can you please help?

I think your title is a little bit to big :-) - Destroyed99, May 30, 2011

sorry im new to this site - stellita7211, May 30, 2011

Welcome to the forum Strellita :) I hope you don't mind that I edited your title for you :) - Kiwi-Girl, May 30, 2011

thank you i didnt know how to use it .. your kiwi? i love NZ i wish i could live there i live in Aussie atm - stellita7211, May 30, 2011

No worries, I think you have to get a few more points to your name then you get the privilege of using the edit button - so keep up the good work. (just a little correction - you are a kiwi?) I surely am, thank you for noticing :) - Kiwi-Girl, May 30, 2011

thank you i am from Brooklyn NY in NYC so spanglish is my native language the only thing is when you travel the world so many languages they tend to get mixed lol .. i appreciate your help:)) - stellita7211, May 30, 2011

haha, Kiwi, Aussie is better! Stellita, I am Aussie, :-) sorry, I couldn't think of a title for your thread! haha good job Kiwi :P - Destroyed99, May 30, 2011

Answer 1

These are all very good answers. But I am more accustomed to saying al ver instead of una vez. The latter is much more common in English. As a result, I would say, Al ver a tu hija por primera vez, yo sé que te vas a enamorar de ella y que vas a apreciar cada momento que compartas con ella, y no importan los errores, ella siempre te amará y te querrá en su vida, espero que te des cuenta.

I changed the form to que te because it keeps it in the same future conditional tense of the beginning. I used al ver a tu hija por priimera vez because this means once you see your daughter for the first time. Also compartas keeps the same sweet tone and means the same as spend with.

Answer 2

Cuando conozcas a tu hija, vas a enamorarte de ella y vas a adorar cada momento que pases con ella y no importarán los errores, ella siempre te va a amar y va a desear que te quedes en su vida. Espero que te des cuenta de eso.

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Answer 3

Tan pronto como veas a tu hija por primera vez, estoy seguro de que te enamorarás de ella y apreciar cada momento que pasan juntos.

(just an attempt though, better wait for a native )

Almost right. You need to put apreciar in future tense and pasar in the subjunctive. - gintar77, May 30, 2011

Espero que usted sepa que su hija le va a encantar desde el primer momento que usted la conoce. Usted va a apreciar cada momento que pasa con ella. Despues de cualquier error, ella le seguirá amando a usted. - stellita7211, Jun 1, 2011

thats not right:( - stellita7211, Jun 1, 2011

Una vez que conozcas a tu hija te enamorarás de ella y apreciarás cada momento que pases con ella, y no importan los errores, ella siempre te amará y querrá en su vida, espero que te des cuenta. - stellita7211, Jun 1, 2011

Answer 4

Una vez que veas tu hija por la primera vez, estoy seguro de que vas a enamorar con ella y tener mucho cariño a ella.

I'm not sre this is 100% correct. I'm just trying it to compare with others.

Hey Dewclaw I put your ñ in for you hope you don't mind :) - Kiwi-Girl, May 30, 2011