Could someone check this short e-mail to the language school for me please?

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Hola Carlos,

Todavía quisiera hacer el examen de nivel, espero que es posible.

Estoy libre todos las mañanas a las 5 de la tarde, sino en jueves en que tengo un clase de la 10 a las 12.

Espero que podamos acodar una hora.

Atentamente,

Rebecca

Hi Carlos,

I would still like to do the level exam, I hope it's possible.

I am free every morning until 5 in the evening, but on Thursdays when I have a class from 10 to 12.

I hope that we can agree a time.

Respectfully yours (or whatever, I just copied what he wrote to me)

Rebecca

I just need to know it's understandable and I didn't make any massive mistakes or insult his mother or anything, I know I have no idea how to write a semi-formal email, but I don't want to give a false idea of my level

Oh, the context is: I wrote to them last week but he said to write again to remind him this week when he'd know his new timetable - rabbitwho, May 23, 2011

Answer 1

Hola Carlos,

Todavía quisiera hacer el examen de nivel, espero que sea posible.

Estoy libre todas las mañanas y hasta las 5 de la tarde, menos los jueves, que tengo una clase de 10 a 12.

Espero que podamos acodar una hora.

Atentamente,

Rebecca

Gracias Heidi! Eres una estrella! - rabbitwho, May 23, 2011