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I believe that I have devised a better way to work this out. First I will back up a bit and pick up after the drunken thug has broken his neck. The tailor is Adán and his friend is Iñigo.

Outside the shop, Iñigo and three of his buddies saw the man enter the shop. Afuera Fuera de la tienda, Iñigo y tres de sus colegos colegas vieronel al hombre entra la tienda.
From the small shop window, they saw (or thought that they saw) the tailor hit the man with both hands and knock him to the floor. Desde la pequeña ventana de la tienda, vieron (o creyeron que vieron) el al sastre golpeó golpear el al hombre con ambos ambas manos y le tiró tirarlo al suelo.
As the four ran into the shop, Don Felicidados came forth and gave the dead man a poke with his cane. Cuando los cuatros cuatro corrían entraron corriendo en la tienda, Don Felicidados venía adelante se adelantó y dio el al muerto un codazo con su bastón.

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updated May 23, 2011
edited by Lector_Constante
posted by Lector_Constante

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Fuera de la tienda, Íñigo y tres de sus colegas vieron al hombre entrar en la tienda. Desde la pequeña ventana de la tienda [...] vieron (o creyeron que vieron) al sastre golpear al hombre con ambas manos y tirarlo al suelo. Cuando los cuatro entraron corriendo en la tienda, Don Felicidados se adelantó y le dio al muerto un codazo con su bastón.

updated May 22, 2011
edited by lazarus1907
posted by lazarus1907
Hi, Laz! Also: "los cuatro" - cogumela, May 22, 2011
Indeed! Thanks. - lazarus1907, May 22, 2011
Foof! Now I have to study all this! And I even made the "ambas" mistake before! - Lector_Constante, May 22, 2011
Cogumela, Laz, muchas gracias! Now I gather that "ver" & some other verbs are followed by "a" or if the object is masc., "al" ... I think ... - Lector_Constante, May 22, 2011
The "personal A" in Spanish is a tricky one, don't worry! - lazarus1907, May 22, 2011
Laz, I see you have made Iñigo Íñigo - but I have found it spelled both ways in Wikipedia. - Lector_Constante, May 22, 2011
You do understand that this tale runs through my head while I sleep, half in English and a quarter in Spanish? S:-{ - Lector_Constante, May 22, 2011