Proof read letter to Spanish school for me please?

Question

Hi guys, would appreciate some help with this. I'm not really worried about form or register or anything, I just want to be sure it's understandable, thanks!

Buenos Dias;

Leí la información en su sito del web. Quisiera estudiar español en sus curso intensivo este Julio, si es posible.

Como tengo trabajo por la tarde, no soy disponible en el primero día de Junio ni en el siete para hacer el examen de nivel. Es posible lo hace en la mañana? O por el fin de semana?

Gracias por su ayuda,

Mi nombre aquí

Hello;

I read the information on your site. I would like to study Spanish in your intensive courses this July, if it's possible.

As I have work in the evening, I'm not available on the first of June nor on the seventh to take the level exam. Is it possible to do it in the morning? Or at the weekend?

Thank you for your help

Name goes here

Answer 1

Hi, Rabbit! Some suggestions

Buenos días;

He leído la información de su página web y estoy interesada en el curso de español intensivo del mes de julio, si es posible.

Como trabajo por las tardes, no puedo estar disponible ni el 1 ni el 7 de junio para hacer el examen de nivel. ¿Hay alguna posibilidad de hacerlo por la mañana o durante el fin de semana?

Gracias por su atención.

Tu nombre aquí

THank You, Cogu for confirming my suggestions or corrections especially the verb form of leer - FELIZ77, May 15, 2011

Thanks so much as always Cogmela! I'll never find as dedicated a teacher! - rabbitwho, May 15, 2011

Answer 2

Yes it is certainly understandable, Rabbit. I have only two suggestions/corrections:

1 suS cursoS intensivoS o su curso intensivo You need to match up the plural so they agree

2 I would use the present perfect tense here rather than the preterite ie He leído (I have read) la información instead of leí (I read)

However, the second point may be open to debate so you might wish to wait to see what other more advanced speakers have to say

I hope that helps

Thanks for the help and detailed explinations Feliz! :) - rabbitwho, May 15, 2011

Rabbit You are welcome I am pleased to help :) - FELIZ77, May 15, 2011

Answer 3

Buenos Dias

A quien le pertenesca. Yo he leido la informacion sobre su sitio de web y queria estudiar sus cursos intensivos este verano. Si sera posible.

Como trabajo en la tarde no estoy disponible para tomar los examenes de nivel el julio 1 ni el 7 de julio. puediera ser possible tomarlo en la manana o sobre el fin de semana?

Gracias

I would use the present perfect, plus the combination of the conditional tenses. As well as the present indicative to make your reasons why.

Hope it helps..

Ibautista I think you mean pudiera (imperfect subj) - FELIZ77, May 15, 2011

Yeah, thanks. I did ment that too. - jbautista626, May 15, 2011

Answer 4

That or in the subjuntive mood aswell..

Answer 5

its good even though i didn't understand anything except buenos dias

That's where I was a year ago, and I have barely studied, so don't worry! :D Welcome to the forum. - rabbitwho, May 15, 2011